【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thought about the question raised in your letter. On my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies at abroad. For one thing, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know that a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For another, I think it will be more convenient for you look after your parents because they are getting older and older. And this is only my point of view. It is up to me to make a right choice.

【答案】1. before---ago

2. thought---thinking

3. On---In

4. at abroad 去掉at

5. that---what

6. easily---easy

7. company---companies

8. look前加to

9. And ---But

10. me---you

【解析】考查介詞。.ago表示“從現(xiàn)在起的若干時(shí)間以前”，意思是“距今以前”，需和過去時(shí)或過去進(jìn)行時(shí)連用。before泛指“從過去起的若干時(shí)間以前”，意思是“距過去某時(shí)以前”“與其（毋寧）”，常和完成時(shí)連用。“I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks——.”我很高興收到你兩周前寄給我的信，可知應(yīng)該是距今兩周之前，故將 before改成ago 。

考查現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)。has/havebeendone是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)，而 I have been thought about the question raised in your letter.我一直在想你信中提出的問題。此句中并無被動(dòng)的意思，而是現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)。故將 thought改為thinking 。

考查固定搭配。In my opinion,意為在我看來。故將On改成In 。

考查介詞。abroad表示“在國(guó)外”“到國(guó)外”等，是副詞，不是名詞，因此不能與 in, to, at 等介詞連用。故 at abroad 去掉at 。

考查主語從句。That引導(dǎo)主語從句時(shí)，在句中無具體含義，只起連接作用，不充當(dāng)句子成分。這樣的話這個(gè)從句就不是完整的句子，缺少studying的賓語，故將 that改為what 。

考查副詞應(yīng)修飾動(dòng)詞。quite為副詞，意為非常地，相當(dāng)?shù)�，�?/span> It will be quite easily for you to find a good job中，quite修飾easily，但easily是副詞，不是動(dòng)詞，所以應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞形式，故將easily改為easy

考查可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。 a few用來修飾可數(shù)名詞，故將 company改為companies

考查分詞。to +look表目的。故look前加to。

考查連詞。this is only my point of view.與前文構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系，意為但這只是我的觀點(diǎn)。故將And 改為But。

考查人稱。由文章意思可知應(yīng)該是“它是由你來做出選擇的，”而不是由我，故將me改為you。

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