Question

閱讀下面的短文,  然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
     News report: Four young female college students died on Friday after falling or jumping from a
blazing room on the sixth floor of Shanghai Business School. Witness said one woman who jumped
appeared to be aiming for bushes on the ground, but missed and landed on concrete. Witnesses said
the other three were desperately trying to climb to another room amid roaring flames when they fell to
the concrete paving.
     The fire broke out in Room 602 of the sevenfloor dormitory at the school's downtown campus on
Zhongshan Road West, just after 6 am. The fire was caused by an electrical device used to heat water.
This had ignited flammable objects, police said late Friday afternoon. After receiving reports of the fire
at 6: 12 am, police, firefighters and ambulances were quickly on the scene. The fire was extinguished
by 6: 30 am, according to the school.
     There is only one public toilet on each floor to get water and fire extinguishers in the dormitory were
outdated, students said.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇報(bào)道的主要內(nèi)容；
2. 以約120個(gè)詞針對(duì)此篇報(bào)道發(fā)表你對(duì)校園安全問題的看法,   至少包括以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
(1)作為學(xué)生,  我們?cè)撊绾卧谖＜钡臓顩r下保護(hù)好自己；
(2)作為校方應(yīng)該采取哪些措施避免此類悲劇的發(fā)生。
[寫作要求]
1. 作文中可使用實(shí)例來支持你的觀點(diǎn),  也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,  但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
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Answer 1

                                                   After the tears, let's focus on dorm safety
     It was reported that a tragedy occurred in a girl's dormitory of the Shanghai Business School. Four
girls jumped from their sixthfloor balcony in an attempt to escape a fire, and lost their lives.
     People expressed their sympathy after hearing the tragedy. In my opinion, this incident reflects a lack
of awareness of safety procedures. Both the college and the students are responsible for it. On one hand, we students should learn to deal with an emergency calmly in daily life. If there is a crisis, we are
supposed to remain calm, ensure we are safe and then call for help. On the other hand, it is the school
authorities' obligation to take safety measures. Furthermore, more lectures should be held on safety to
enhance students' awareness of the issue.
     In short, to avoid similar tragedies, both sides must work together.
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