Question

10．假定你是李華，一位熱衷中國文化的美國朋友James來信想了解你最近參加的一次校園"詩詞大會(huì)"（PoetryConference）活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)用英文給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．活動(dòng)目的（走進(jìn)中國詩詞，感受傳統(tǒng)文化…）
2．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容（詩歌誦讀、古詩詞欣賞…）
3．活動(dòng)體驗(yàn)（…）注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear James，
Glad to share with you my latest participation in School Poetry Conference．（點(diǎn)明書信主題）Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（活動(dòng)目的）During the activity，we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways．Meanwhile，we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction．（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．【高分句型二】（自己的活動(dòng)體驗(yàn)）
Do you havesome similar activities？Please introduce one to me next time．（想要了解對(duì)方這一方面的活動(dòng)）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹校園"詩詞大會(huì)"活動(dòng)的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和第一人稱．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明書信主題；二活動(dòng)目的；三活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；四自己的活動(dòng)體驗(yàn)；五想要了解對(duì)方這一方面的活動(dòng)．
高分句型：
1．Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．句子里謂語動(dòng)詞aims to 表示"目的在于"； approach into表示"接近"；form a better understanding of表示"對(duì)于某事形成更好的理解"．
基本上來說，這個(gè)活動(dòng)的目的在于提供給我們更接近中國詩詞的機(jī)會(huì)，并且有助于我們對(duì)于中國傳統(tǒng)文化形成更好的理解．
2．For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指a meaningful experience；as well as 表示"也包括"．
對(duì)我來說，這是一次有意義的經(jīng)歷，這次經(jīng)歷結(jié)果是一次進(jìn)入中國文化和我們內(nèi)心世界的奇妙之旅．

解答 Dear James，
    Glad to share with you my latest participation in School Poetry Conference．（點(diǎn)明書信主題）Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（活動(dòng)目的）During the activity，we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways．Meanwhile，we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction．（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．【高分句型二】（自己的活動(dòng)體驗(yàn)）
     Do you have some similar activities？Please introduce one to me next time．（想要了解對(duì)方這一方面的活動(dòng)）
                                                                        Yours，
                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫作時(shí)，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)．考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢．動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．