Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去當(dāng)?shù)夭┪镳^參觀中國瓷器(Chinese Porcelain)展。請(qǐng)給喜歡中國文化的外教Josie寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括:

1.出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間:

2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容:了解中國瓷器的歷史，欣賞首次展出的中國瓷器等。

注意:適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫，詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Josie,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Josie,

Having learned you are interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the local museum next Saturday to appreciate Chinese porcelain.

During the visit, we will learn abundant information about its history. What is the most important is that we have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare porcelain, some of which is exhibited for the first time. As we all know, porcelain was a Chinese invention and is famous for the finest quality. Thus, you will definitely have a fantastic feast for your eyes. Besides, we should be back around 4pm. If you can come, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 8:00am.

I’m Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給外教寫信，邀請(qǐng)她去參觀中國瓷器展，并介紹相關(guān)情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分

要求：

1. 表明寫信目的

2.

1）出發(fā)及返程時(shí)間

2）活動(dòng)內(nèi)容:了解中國瓷器的歷史，欣賞首次展出的中國瓷器等

3. 期待老師的參加

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

be interested in/ invite sb to do sth/ on behalf of/ learn about/ have a chance to do sth/ plan to do sth/ set off/ be famous for/ date back to/ have a better understanding of/for the first time

第三步：連詞成句

There will be an exhibition about Chinese porcelain held next Sunday.

Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, so I’d like to invite to join us, on behalf of my classmates.

During the visit, we will have a better understanding of its history.

What is the most important is that we have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare porcelain, some of which are exhibited for the first time.

As we all know, porcelain was a Chinese invention and is famous for the finest quality.

Thus, you will definitely have a fantastic feast for your eyes.

By the way, we plan to set off at 8:00am and back at 4pm.

If you can come, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate

第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）

表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…

狀語從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…

定語從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改潤色（加入高級(jí)詞匯或短語）