Question

4．下面的柱狀圖（bar chart）顯示了不同年齡段孩子與父母談心的情況．

根據(jù)上圖信息，請以"Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents"為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個詞的短文．要求如下：
1．簡要描述圖中信息；
2．說明原因（如忙于學(xué)習(xí)或工作、缺少共同話題…）；
3．談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）．
Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents
As is shown in the bar chart，                                        

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文要求考生談?wù)撽P(guān)于孩子與父母談心的話題．要將圖表所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．重要短語：
 on average，平均；busy doing sth．忙于做某事；
高分句子：
1．In my opinion，children should let their parents know more about what they are interested in．本句中含有what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，豐富了句子結(jié)構(gòu)．
2．Only in this way can they better understand each other．本句含有重要句式，only置于句首時，主句要進(jìn)行倒裝，意為只有…才…

解答 Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents
As is shown in the bar chart， children spend less time having heart-to-heart talks with their parents when they grow older．For example，the 7-9 age group spends as many as 6 hours per week on average，while the 16-18 age group spends only half the time（描述圖中信息）．
There are two major reasons for this．（指出原因）For one thing，both parents and children are too busy working or studying．For another，there aren't many topics of common interest for them to talk about．
In my opinion，children should let their parents know more about what they are interested in（高分句型）．At the same time，parents should spend more time talking with their children and sharing opinions with them．Only in this way can they better understand each other（高分句型）．

點(diǎn)評 在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體．