Question

Please describe one of the most impressive, unforgettable or interesting outings, trips or journeys that you’ve ever made alone, together with your parents or close friends within 120 words in total.

請你描述一次你獨(dú)自一人、和你的父母親或者好朋友一起進(jìn)行過的、令你印象最深刻的、難忘的、或者有趣的旅行，120詞左右。

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Answer 1

One of my unforgettable journeys that I’ve ever made is the one to Sanya, Hainan Island together with my parents. Both Mother and I were full of excitement because neither had ever flown before. Aboard the airplane, I was taking pictures and chatting with other members of the tourist group. Climbing out of it, I smelled the fresh air, the salty sea winds and the smell of seafood. I could hardly wait to taste some. Unexpectedly， I did. As the leader of our group, my father had arranged some colleagues to go to a large nearby market to get some local and typical seafood and asked a good restaurant to cook and stir-fry them for us. How delicious and tasty they were! And none remained.

The following day, we went to several beautiful and romantic beaches. The most exciting and challenging part was that I went scuba-diving with my parents, where I saw many colorful fishes of all kinds and sizes swimming around us, seemingly welcoming and chatting with us. What fun it was!

On the third day, we went to visit a large farm where we saw and tasted some local fruits, especially coffee with different flavors. I came to know the process of producing and making coffee and why it had been so popular throughout the world. I took many pictures with the working farmers there.

On the fourth day, we visited one of the world-famous scenic spots-Tianyahaijiao for the whole day. I felt extremely excited when I finally managed to find the two separate parts of huge stones standing/lying at the most southern tip of China. To my surprise, there were a large number of elderly and young couples standing on or in front of them, promising to each other that they would love forever until death, never part. Later, explained by Father, I knew what it meant. How I envied them! I insisted that my parents should have a memorable photo taken too. Meanwhile I suddenly felt so small standing on the top of them. Anyway my fantastic dream came true.Then and there, I was determined that I should make a number of visits to this paradise in the years to come.

Believe it or not, I often have dreams about it.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是敘述一件事情來反映主題，所以要用一般過去時(shí)。但本文必須用第一、三人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如to my surprise，come to know，還運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句，that引導(dǎo)賓語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：meanwhile等等。

考點(diǎn)：材料作文