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8．假定你叫李華，你對食品安全問題十分關(guān)注．最近你在報刊上讀到了一些相關(guān)的報道，一些生產(chǎn)商為降低成本追求利潤，缺乏足夠的安全措施，竟然生產(chǎn)不合格食品，對人們身心健康產(chǎn)生極大危害．請你就此事給一家英文報刊寫封信，談?wù)勀銈�人的看法并呼吁整個社會關(guān)注此事．
參考詞匯：利潤profit； 安全措施safety measures； 不合格食品 low-quality food
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Dear Sir，
I'm writing to talk about the problem of food safety nowadays．It is frequently reported that…
                                                                  
Yours truly
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于食品安全問題的文章，根據(jù)題目要求可知一第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，內(nèi)容包括：一 點明主題；二 造成食品安全問題的原因；三 提出建議并呼吁整個社會關(guān)注此事．
高分句型：
1．It is frequently reported that some poisonous food does great harm to people's health句子里It是形式主語，代指主語從句that some poisonous food does great harm to people's health；does great harm to 表示"對…造成傷害"．
經(jīng)常見到有毒食品對人們的健康造成傷害的報道．
2．In order to reduce the cost and make more profits，they ignore our health and go against the laws，producing low-quality food and doing us harm．句子里In order to reduce the cost and make more profits是目的狀語； producing low-quality food and doing us harm是現(xiàn)在分詞做必然的結(jié)果狀語．
為降低成本追求利潤，他們不顧我們的健康，違反法律，生產(chǎn)不合格食品，對我們的身體健康產(chǎn)生極大危害．

解答 Dear Sir，
    I'm writing to talk about the problem of food safety nowadays．It is frequently reported that some poisonous food does great harm to people's health．【高分句型一】（點明主題）
    Food safety is always drawing the public concern．But still some food producers don't take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality．In order to reduce the cost and make more profits，they ignore our health and go against the laws，producing low-quality food and doing us harm．【高分句型二】（造成食品安全問題的原因）
    For our health，we must take food safety seriously．Food supervisors shall operate strict food standard and punish those ill producers．Here I call on the whole society to take action and stop the low-quality food from flowing into the market．If everybody works hard at it，we will enjoy a healthier life．（提出建議并呼吁整個社會關(guān)注此事）
                                                                                                                                     Yours truly
                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

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