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10．假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生，請根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容和要求，以"Keep away from dangers"為題寫一篇英語短文，向某中學(xué)生英語報投稿，講述自己的所見所聞和認(rèn)識．
注意：
1．文中不能出現(xiàn)個人的真實信息；
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3．詞數(shù)：120左右；
4．標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
 
Keep away from dangers
I will never forget the unexpected incident that happened last Sunday．I will never forget the unexpected incident that happened last Sunday．The weather was very hot when I was walking by the lake，in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign．（高分句型一） Suddenly，there came the screams"Help!Help…"．A boy was drowning with all the others at a loss．Luckily，a young man passing by jumped into the lake without any hesitation and managed to rescue the boy，who really experienced a narrow escape．（高分句型二）（事發(fā)過程）
As far as I'm concerned，we should increase the students'awareness of safety．Teachers and parents should warn children of the danger of swimming without adults'company．Especially as summer is approaching，chilren are supposed to be organized to participate in a variety of activities．What's more，all of us teenagers should always keep safety in mind wherever we are．（提出建議）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The weather was very hot when I was walking by the lake，in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign
高分句型二：
Luckily，a young man passing by jumped into the lake without any hesitation and managed to rescue the boy，who really experienced a narrow escape．
句型一 in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign．該句是一個非限制性定語從句，此處使用了介詞+關(guān)系代詞，which在句中替代前面的先行詞lake，而此處介詞的選擇則依靠句子結(jié)構(gòu)，孩子們是在湖里游泳，in （在．．里）
句型二 who really experienced a narrow escape．該句是一個由who作關(guān)系代詞，在句中充當(dāng)主語的非限制性定語從句
此外還有以下高級詞匯和短語：
as far as sb be concerned 在某人看來  be supposed to do sth 應(yīng)該做某事

解答 I will never forget the unexpected incident that happened last Sunday．The weather was very hot when I was walking by the lake，in which some children were swimming，ignoring the warming sign．（高分句型一） Suddenly，there came the screams"Help!Help…"．A boy was drowning with all the others at a loss．Luckily，a young man passing by jumped into the lake without any hesitation and managed to rescue the boy，who really experienced a narrow escape．（高分句型二）（事發(fā)過程）
   As far as I'm concerned，we should increase the students'awareness of safety．Teachers and parents should warn children of the danger of swimming without adults'company．Especially as summer is approaching，chilren are supposed to be organized to participate in a variety of activities．What's more，all of us teenagers should always keep safety in mind wherever we are．（提出建議）

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