Question

5．請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文．詞數(shù)不少于50．
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim．Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容和提示用英語寫一篇短文．這既是情景作文又是一種開放性作文．
重點詞匯：try to do（盡力去做某事）；  extremely（非常，極其）； come to nothing（失敗，毫無結(jié)果）；
convey（傳達，表達）；fulfill one's goals （實現(xiàn)某人的目標）；definitely（清楚地，當然）；take  for
granted（把…視為理所當然）
高分句型：1．In my opinion，①what that the picture conveys is ②that we should find a proper way to fulfill our goals no matter what we do．
                 ①what that the picture conveys 是一個主語從句，疑問代詞what捉動詞convey的賓語；②that引導一個表語從句，作系動詞is的表語．
                 2．The little boy curiously tries on the larger shoes，hoping to walk fast just like adults．
                  hoping to walk fast just like adults在句中是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語．
                 3．①To avoid such problems，all we need to do is to adopt a proper and reasonable way，②which will absolutely benefit us．
                  ①To avoid such problems是不定式短語作目的狀語；②which引導一個非限制性定語從句．

解答 Jim，as you can see in the picture，a little boy is trying to walk in a pair of shoes which is extremely larger than the size of his feet．The sweet smiling on his face shows his excitement about getting his wish--trying big shoes to go faster．Obviously，his wish will come to nothing．
In my opinion，what that the picture conveys is that we should find a proper way to fulfill our goals no matter what we do．（高分句型一）The little boy curiously tries on the larger shoes，hoping to walk fast just like adults（高分句型二）．But I don't think it's an easy job．Some people in our life do exactly the same as the boy．It's definitely good to keep an open mind and have courage to try something new．However，we'd better seek more suitable ways instead of taking it for granted．Otherwise，we will get into troubles．To avoid such problems，all we need to do is to adopt a proper and reasonable way，which will absolutely benefit us（高分句型三）．
And how do you think about that，Jim？

點評 看圖作文要求將畫面所包含的有效信息用文字表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．