Question

假如你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。最近，你班同學(xué)正在參加21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)“大家談”欄目的一個(gè)討論。本次話題為：“父母有沒(méi)有必要陪讀？”
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論的情況。

70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：	30%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：
1.父母不應(yīng)該陪讀 2.父母陪讀讓我們養(yǎng)成依賴的習(xí)慣，不利于我們將來(lái)自控能力的培養(yǎng)，不利于我們培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。 3.父母陪讀影響了他們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)和休息。	1.父母應(yīng)該陪讀 2.父母陪讀能使我們騰出更多的專心學(xué)習(xí)，使我們身體更健康。 3.父母陪讀能幫助我們確立學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)，督促我們完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，鼓勵(lì)我們獨(dú)立解決困難，培養(yǎng)我們養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。

注意：1. 信的形式已經(jīng)為你寫好。
2．詞數(shù)100左右。
3．參考詞匯：陪讀 accompany sb studying at school  督促 urge
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school.
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Answer 1

Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school.
We do have different opinions on this matter. Most of us (about 70%)think our parents should not accompany us studying at school since it make us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we won’t form the good habit of studying. What’s more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves. At the same time it affects our parents’ work, studies and rest.
While about 30%of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. Accompanying us studying at school can let us have more time to spare for our studies. Besides, we shall be more healthy for their cooking. On the other hand our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying..
Yours truly,
Li Hua

這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信，介紹同學(xué)們關(guān)于父母有沒(méi)有必要陪讀這個(gè)話題的討論情況。本題給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。