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13．作為一名中學(xué)生，你在成長的過程中會學(xué)到很多東西，如：如何有愛心、承擔(dān)責(zé)任、學(xué)會感恩、擇友等等．請選擇一個話題，用英語描述一段經(jīng)歷，并說說你的想法．字?jǐn)?shù)：100-120字左右．
A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost．I've learned this from my own experience．
Once before a test，my friend Joy and I came into the classroom，where several classmates gathered around，writing something excitedly．I was shocked when one of them told us secretly，"My friend in another class finished the test yesterday．I'll share you the right answers!"I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed．I refused her"generous"offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder，whispering，"We needn't follow them．"
To my understanding，friends，like books，if well chosen，will greatly benefit us．Never should we keep bad company．．

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分析 本文是開放式作文．在成長的過程中會學(xué)到很多東西，如：如何有愛心、承擔(dān)責(zé)任、學(xué)會感恩、擇友等等，根據(jù)所給信息選擇一個話題寫一篇短文．寫作要點：描述一段經(jīng)歷，闡述想法．寫作時人稱用第一和第三人稱．時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．重要短語：reliable companion （值得信賴的同伴），get lost （迷失），share sth with sb （與…分享某物），pat sb on the shoulder （拍某人的肩膀），keep sb company （陪伴某人），learn sth from （從…中學(xué)會．）．

解答 A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost．【高分句型】I've learned this from my own experience．（引出話題）
Once before a test，my friend Joy and I came into the classroom，where several classmates gathered around，writing something excitedly．【高分句型】I was shocked when one of them told us secretly，"My friend in another class finished the test yesterday．I'll share you with the right answers!"I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed．I refused her"generous"offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder，whispering，"We needn't follow them．"【高分句型】（舉例）
To my understanding，friends，like books，if well chosen，will greatly benefit us．【高分句型】Never should we keep bad company．【高分句型】（總結(jié)升華）

點評 類似這種開放式作文可遵循以下寫作步驟：首段：議論，引出主題，點出觀點．第二段：記敘文段落，舉例子．第三段：議論，總結(jié)升華觀點，回應(yīng)開頭．同時寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．