Question

亞運(yùn)會(huì)即將在廣州舉行。作為學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的成員，你準(zhǔn)備明天向到訪的英國(guó)學(xué)生游學(xué)團(tuán)介紹8月4日已在廣州舉行的亞運(yùn)倒計(jì)時(shí)100天的慶祝活動(dòng)（100-day Countdown Ceremony）。
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
100天慶�；顒�(dòng)的時(shí)間：2010年8月4日7：30
慶�；顒�(dòng)地點(diǎn)：廣州天河體育館（Tianhe Sports Gymnasium）
主題：Dreaming about This Moment
意義：展示廣州已經(jīng)準(zhǔn)備好了
活動(dòng)安排： 1．龍舟和武術(shù)表演
2．2000名合唱團(tuán)成員（chorus）演唱
3．著名歌手演唱三首亞運(yùn)會(huì)候選主題歌（theme song candidates）
參加人員： 1000多名志愿者，工人，醫(yī)務(wù)人員，學(xué)生，老干部（retirees）等
[寫(xiě)作要求]
只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。（開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)）
Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome to our school．I’d like to tell you something about Guangzhou Asian Games…．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome to our school．I’d like to tell you something about Guangzhou Asian Games．At 7:30, August 4, 2010, Guangzhou Asian Games 100-day Countdown Ceremony was held in Tianhe Sports Gymnasium．With the theme “Dreaming about This Moment”, the ceremony meant to show that Guangzhou was ready for the coming Games．Starting with Dragon Boat and Wushu performances, the ceremony also included 2000 chorus’ singing．The most exciting moment came when three theme song candidates were sung by famous singers．More than 1000 volunteers, workers, doctors and nurses, students and referees participated in this ceremony．

解析