Question

假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。請用英語給出版社的編輯寫封信，表達(dá)你對現(xiàn)在使用的英語材料的看法，內(nèi)容主要包括：
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：
1.話題廣泛；
2.圖片豐富；
3.有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣。
建議：適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度。
注意：
詞數(shù)100左右；
可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫；
開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Editor，
As a student reader, I’m writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．                                                                          
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

Dear editor,
As a student reader, I ’am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. For example, we can find different topics in the books, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have become interested in the subject.
However, many new words and expressions are hard for us to learn. Therefore, I’d like you to change them into easier ones.
Best regards
LI Hua

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇范文觀點(diǎn)明確，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式富有變化：These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句，Even the students who used to dislike English have become interested in the subject.這句話用了定語從句，many new words and expressions are hard for us to learn.這句話用了：Sb/Sth is +adj +to do 這個句型，還有文章使用了 What’s more,  For example, such as However, Therefore,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。