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15．最近，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票越來越流行，幾乎人人都參與了網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票，在給人們帶來好處的同時(shí)，也讓人進(jìn)退兩難，不知道是否應(yīng)該參與這樣的投票，你班就此進(jìn)行了討論，請根據(jù)討論結(jié)果，以"To vote or not to vote？"為題寫一篇短文．

贊同	★參與現(xiàn)代生活的一種方式，與普通的投票活動(dòng)沒什么不同； ★方便容易，不受時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)的限制； ★反饋迅速可靠
反對	★使人們產(chǎn)生被迫的感覺； ★結(jié)果并不客觀； ★可能會因商業(yè)目的被故意利用
你的觀點(diǎn)	（1）…（2）…

注意：
（1）逐一陳述所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯．
（2）詞數(shù)：150左右．開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（3）參考詞匯：反饋feedback
Online voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it．It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma．Recently，our class had a discussion about whether we should vote or not．Opinions are divided on this topic．                                       

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票越來越流行，幾乎人人都參與了網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票，在給人們帶來好處的同時(shí)，也讓人進(jìn)退兩難，不知道是否應(yīng)該參與這樣的投票，你班就此進(jìn)行了討論，請根據(jù)討論結(jié)果，以"To vote or not to vote？"為題寫一篇短文，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從不同觀點(diǎn)、理由及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)幾個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：no more than僅僅是；make no difference沒有區(qū)別；In addition另外；regardless of不管，不顧；Furthermore而且；However然而；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；take advantage of 利用；to some extent在某種程度上；Therefore因此
Some think that on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life．（高分句型一）It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports．（高分句型二）
From my point of view，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted．（高分句型三）

解答    Online voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it．It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma．Recently，our class had a discussion about whether we should vote or not．Opinions are divided on this topic．
      Some think that on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life．（高分句型一）It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports．（高分句型二）In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space．Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible．However，others are somewhat puzzled at its negative impacts on people and society．
      Firstly，people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don't want to．Secondly，voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors，but rather on how many social-networking resources they have．Thirdly，the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes．
      From my point of view，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted．（高分句型三）Therefore，rules should be worked out and strictly observed．Everyone in our society should help those in need，but it is more important to be sincere and earnest．

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