Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽，請(qǐng)撰寫一份演講稿，內(nèi)容主要包括：

目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康、是一種低碳的生活方式，等等。

參考詞匯：低碳生活(low-carbon lifestyle)

注意：1.詞數(shù)：120字左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then?

As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us !

Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：要求撰寫演講稿，這屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時(shí)要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應(yīng)用文寫作對(duì)于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達(dá)到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)上：可采取總分模式。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】因?yàn)槭茄葜v比賽，所以在文章開頭介紹自己和自己演講的題目。第二句As is known to all,眾所周知，引出現(xiàn)狀。后面緊接著用了一個(gè)with the improvement of people’s living standards隨著人們生活水平提高這是with的符合結(jié)構(gòu)。bringing great convenience to our life.給我們的生活帶來了方便，這里是非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨狀語。第三句開始引入話題，句首用了一個(gè)however，表示轉(zhuǎn)折。第二段As far as I’m concerned,就我而言、我認(rèn)為，這里引出自己的觀點(diǎn)。For one thing…For another經(jīng)常用來陳述觀點(diǎn)，一方面如何如何讓，另一方面又如何如何。第三句What’s more此外、第四句therefore因此，都是很好的連詞，由于清晰文章層次。文章中比較好的短語有 environmentally friendly環(huán)境友好型、give off釋放、it is beneficial to …對(duì)…有好處、take the responsibility to負(fù)起責(zé)任去做…、build up建立。文章不僅運(yùn)用了大量的精煉詞匯，還使用了很多適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，提升了文章的檔次。

考點(diǎn)：考察應(yīng)用文寫作。