Question

【題目】假設你是王森，十一月二十一日是你在美國的筆友湯姆的生日。你給他寄了一盒中國的綠茶（green tea）作為生日禮物�，F在，請你用英語寫一封110字左右的信給他，祝賀他生日快樂，并根據下面的六幅圖和提示詞語詳細描繪一下怎么沏茶。

提示詞：壺 kettle茶匙 teaspoon茶壺 teapot

茶葉 tea-leaves 茶杯 teacup 茶壺蓋 lid

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How is it going? Your birthday is approaching. I wish you a happy birthday! Please allow me to send you a box of Chinese green tea as a gift for your birthday．

I’d like to tell you how to make the tea. First, fill a kettle with cold water and heat the water. Wait until the water is boiling. While waiting, place one teaspoon of tealeaves into the teapot. Then, pour the boiling water form the kettle onto the leaves in the pot. Leave for a few minutes before serving. Finally, Pour the tea into a teacup. Depending on the tea, you might add sugar, milk, or honey. Keep the pot covered with a lid to keep the tea warm, and enjoy it．

I hope you’ll accept it and like it．

Truly yours

Wang Sen

【解析】

這是一篇看圖寫作題。根據所給圖片以及詞匯來詳細描述一下怎么沏茶。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文（看圖寫作）

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現在時。

要求：1.表達問候以及祝愿（I wish you a happy birthday!）

2.描述沏茶的過程（how to make the tea.）

3.希望對方喜歡

第二步:列提綱 （重點單詞及詞組）

approach; allow sb to do; fill with; while doing; pour into; depending on;be covered with

第三步：連詞成句

1. Your birthday is approaching

2. Please allow me to send you a box of Chinese green tea as a gift for your birthday

3. fill a kettle with cold water and heat the water.

4. While waiting, place one teaspoon of tealeaves into the teapot.

5. Pour the tea into a teacup.

6. Depending on the tea, you might add sugar, milk, or honey

7. Keep the pot covered with a lid to keep the tea warm, and enjoy it

根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

第五步：潤色修改

連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，