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17．假設(shè)你是李華．在我校留學(xué)的意大利女孩Sara對端午節(jié)很感興趣，計(jì)劃端午期間到海南各地走走，了解海南端午節(jié)文化．她寫信向你咨詢相關(guān)事宜．請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給她回一封電子郵件．內(nèi)容包括：
1．端午節(jié)的時(shí)間和起源；
2．主要慶祝活動(dòng)方式；
3．建議她品嘗儋州、定安粽子，到澄邁縣觀看龍舟賽．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：端午節(jié) The Dragon Boat Festival    投江 drown oneself in river
粽子Zongzi                     糯米 glutinous rice
Dear Sara，
Knowing that your are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in Hainan，           ．
Wish you a pleasant journey around Hainan．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him．
因?yàn)榱私馑�是一個(gè)很好的人，地方上的人劃著船沿著河流尋找他．
高分句型二：
I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County．
我也建議你在澄邁縣觀看盛大的龍舟比賽．

解答 Dear Sara，
Knowing that your are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in Hainan，I am writing to tell you about it and give you some advice．
The Dragon Boat Festival，which falls on May 5^th at lunar calendar，is an important Chinese festival in memory of a great poet named Qu Yuan．It is said that Qu Yan committed suicide by drowning himself in the Miluo River．Knowing him to be a good man，local people rowed boats along the river in search of him（高分句型一）．They also threw rice into the river to feed the fish so that they would not eat Qu's body．That's why Chinese people celebrate the festival by eating Zongzi and holding dragon boat competitions．
Zongzi is a kind of dumpling made of glutinous rice with meat and eggs inside．The most famous Zongzi in Hainan are those made in Danzhou City and Ding'an County．I suggest you try some．I also recommend that you watch the grand dragon boat competition in Chengmai County（高分句型二）．It is one of the most exciting competitions across Hainan．You won't forget it．
Wish you a pleasant journey around Hainan．
                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 本書面表達(dá)為議論文，議論文是對某現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行點(diǎn)評．寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點(diǎn)．