Question

在我們的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中，與人合作是非常重要的。請你根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇
題為“Cooperate with others"的英文演講稿。
1．為何與人合作
2．與誰合作
3．怎樣做一個好的合作者
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120 -150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：合作者partner   高效地efficiently
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is "Cooperate with others".                                
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Thank you for your listening!

Answer 1

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Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others'
In our daily life and study, if we want to accomplish our work efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others. Cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.
When we cooperate with someone we like，we will feel very happy. We can share our pleasure and sadness with him. But it challenges us to get along with others to cooperate with someone we dislike. What’s more, we should focus on our work, instead of our partners. Perhaps in working together with him for a long time, we'll find out that he is a man to get along well with.
How can we become a good partner? In my opinion, we should try to listen to others. If they make mistakes, we also try to point them out. Also, we mustn't embarrass others to make them in unfavorable position.
Thank you for your listening!

試題分析：認(rèn)真審題，把握要求，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵句。開放作文需要考生根據(jù)試題提示的要求進行立意，確定文章的中心思想。立意的基礎(chǔ)是審題。因此，考生在著手寫作之前，要認(rèn)真審題，把握命題要求，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵句。二、依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章脈絡(luò)。通過認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)關(guān)鍵句以后，下一步的任務(wù)就是如何安排已選定的這些材料，要為自己心中所設(shè)想的材料草擬一個提綱，梳理清楚先后順序。這樣寫起來就會有條不紊、條理清楚、詳略得當(dāng)，使得所寫的文章中心突出。三、準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)。遣詞造句要揚長避短。考生應(yīng)該依據(jù)文章提示準(zhǔn)確定位人稱。在人稱、時態(tài)準(zhǔn)確定位以后，考生應(yīng)將重點放在文章的遣詞造句上。
點評：考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。