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【題目】最近，西安持續(xù)半個月的霧霾，引起人們對環(huán)境問題的重視。為豐富中學(xué)生的環(huán)保知識，培養(yǎng)愛護環(huán)境的意識，學(xué)校英語社決定舉行一次環(huán)境保護教育的座談會。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇文章，在座談會上交流發(fā)言。

寫作要點：1．霧霾天氣的危害：傷害身體；影響交通；導(dǎo)致交通意外等等

2．霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因：空氣污染；燒煤；汽車尾氣排放等等

3．就怎樣減少霧霾提出至少三條建議。

參考詞匯：尾氣排放：exhaust emission 霧霾天氣：hazy weather

注意：1. 短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域；

2. 短文詞數(shù)不少于100；

3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以結(jié)構(gòu)完整，使行文連貫。

4. 書寫須清晰、工整。

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, the hazy weather frequently appears in our city. It has not only done harm to people’s health, but also affected the public transportation. Because of the low visibility, terrible accidents happen every now and then, some highways have to be shut down.

Obviously, air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of hazy weather. At the same time, smoke from burning coal and all kinds of dust are also important factors. Besides, exhaust emission from cars and buses has made the situation even worse.

So as to protect our environment from becoming worse, we should take actions in no time. we are supposed to reduce the use of coal and boost the use of public transport facilities, aiming to cut down the carbon dioxide emission. If we must use vehicle, try to use the environmental friendly ones. Such as, bicycle , green car. With everyone’s effort, I believe we will regain a fresh, clean and bright world soon.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇談看法的寫作。對霧霾環(huán)境問題的討論，在座談會上交流發(fā)言。闡述霧霾問題的危害，原因，以及對霧霾減少的提出建議。適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點說明】not only… but also…，now and then，shut down，result in，Because of，take actions，be supposed to等詞組使文章更生動；Obviously，At the same time，Besides使文章調(diào)理更清晰。we are supposed to reduce the use of coal and boost the use of public transport facilities, aiming to cut down the carbon dioxide emission.使用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；With everyone’s effort, I believe we will regain a fresh, clean and bright world soon.使用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)；文章的安排分為三部分，開頭部分：霧霾問題的危害。正文部分：霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因。結(jié)尾部分：簡要總結(jié)，提出建議。