Question

假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)就食品衛(wèi)生問題，給某報(bào)社英文欄目編輯寫一封100詞左右的信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1．你的鄰居因食用從市場(chǎng)買回來的偽劣食品中毒；

2．你目睹了他們中毒與在鄰里幫助下脫險(xiǎn)的經(jīng)過；

3．呼吁社會(huì)各界重視食品衛(wèi)生與安全；打擊牟取暴利的不法商販。

注意：信的開頭與落款已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：偽劣食品fake food ; 衛(wèi)生 hygiene

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident._________________________________________

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                                                                                      Yours,

                                                                                      Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident. Several days ago, my neighbor family ate a bag of fake food from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten as their faces turned pale. Fortunately, another neighbor passed by only to find the accident and immediately called the ambulance, which carried them quickly to hospital. After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.

From this all of us have realized the importance of food safety. As some illegal business men are only interested in making profits in the race to become rich quickly, they seldom care about the necessary safety measures and hygiene or care what happens to consumers. They must be charged by law. Meanwhile I do hope the whole society shall begin taking actions to protect people’s life safety.

                                                                                 Yours,

                                                                                         Li Hua

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