Question

13．假如你叫李華，你校于4月27日組織了一次校園合唱節(jié)活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給你的美國(guó)筆友Jack寫一封電子郵件，告訴他此次活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況．
1．活動(dòng)的目的； 2．活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和方式； 3．你對(duì)本次活動(dòng)的感悟
參考詞匯：校園合唱節(jié)Campus Choral Festival
Dear Jack，
I am Li Hua，…
How are you doing recently？I miss you very much．Now I'm so excited that I can't wait to share with you an unforgettable experience．
Last Friday，our school held a Campus Choral Festival，aimed to offer students a chance to show their talent for singing．It lasted 3 days and 18 classes participated in this competition．As was required，each class chose 2 songs to prepare and performed on the stage of our school concert hall．All the students were happy to seize this opportunity torehearse．With the help of teachers，we sang very well and ranked 5th among all the participating classes，which was received with much applause．
I am very happy that our efforts have paid off．The festival benefits us a lot．Not only does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork，it has also promoted the friendship among us．What a wonderful time!
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封介紹校園合唱節(jié)活動(dòng)的書信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書信目的；二活動(dòng)的目的，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)和方式；三對(duì)本次活動(dòng)的感悟．
高分句型：
1．Last Friday，our school held a Campus Choral Festival，aimed to offer students a chance to show their talent for singing．句子里aimed to 是過去分詞做定語，表示"目的在于"，和名詞a Campus Choral Festival是被動(dòng)關(guān)系．
上周五，我們學(xué)校組織了一次校園合唱節(jié)活動(dòng)，目的在于給學(xué)生提供展示他們歌唱才能的機(jī)會(huì)．
2．Not only does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork，it has also promoted the friendship among us．句子里Not only 位于句首，句子does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork用了部分倒裝．
這個(gè)活動(dòng)不僅有助于合作精神，讓我們從繁重的課業(yè)里解脫出來，而且也促進(jìn)了我們同學(xué)之間的友誼．

解答 Dear Jack，
   How are you doing recently？I miss you very much．Now I'm so excited that I can't wait to share with you an unforgettable experience．（表明書信目的）
  Last Friday，our school held a Campus Choral Festival，aimed to offer students a chance to show their talent for singing．【高分句型一】It lasted 3 days and 18 classes participated in this competition．As was required，each class chose 2 songs to prepare and performed on the stage of our school concert hall．All the students were happy to seize this opportunity torehearse．With the help of teachers，we sang very well and ranked 5th among all the participating classes，which was received with much applause．（活動(dòng)的目的，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)和方式）
I am very happy that our efforts have paid off．The festival benefits us a lot．Not only does it help us share the spirit of teamwork and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork，it has also promoted the friendship among us．【高分句型二】What a wonderful time!（對(duì)本次活動(dòng)的感悟）
                                                                                                                Sincerely Yours
                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文都只給出只言片 語的提示，而不是完整的表達(dá)．此時(shí)我們 就必須在大腦中將各信息點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充完整，適 時(shí)使用一些短語和句型，以及各種從句． 此時(shí)要記住，"有話好好說，有話慢慢 說"，不要想著一蹴而就．我們有這樣的 體驗(yàn)：提綱式書面表達(dá)的寫作中，我們還 沒寫幾句，就感覺所有要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)表達(dá)完 了．在寫作中一定注意避免這樣的情況，