Question

假設(shè)你叫王成。你的英國(guó)筆友Rose想了解你校學(xué)生的體育鍛煉情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖信息，給她寫(xiě)一封信，簡(jiǎn)要陳述你的看法。

75%的學(xué)生不參加體育鍛煉	1. 不愛(ài)好體育鍛煉； 2. 無(wú)鍛煉場(chǎng)地； 3. 學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)重。
25%的學(xué)生參加體育鍛煉	......

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Rose,

As we enter Senior Three, fewer and fewer students do physical training. ____________________

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Best wishes!

Wang Cheng

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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One possible version

Dear Rose,

As we enter Senior Three, fewer and fewer students do physical training. According to a survey, only 25% of the students do sports. They can benefit a lot from sports. There are many reasons for students not doing physical training. Some students complain that they have too much homework to do and have not enough time to do exercise. Some of them say that they aren’t fond of doing physical training since childhood. Others say that they live far away from places where they can do physical training. Because of all these, many of us lack physical training and are in poor health.

In my view, we should realize the importance of taking exercise. Firstly, without health, we can’t learn well. Only in good health can we learn attentively. Secondly, as we all know, time is a spongy. We can find time to do exercise if study and physical training are balanced. In all, once we lose our health, we gain nothing. Let’s do physical training right now.   

Best wishes,

Wang Cheng

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，且是一篇信件，所以要用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě).的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的信件。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書(shū)信，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。