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3．假定你校將舉行ー個成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言．請你按以下內(nèi)容要點準備ー篇 英文發(fā)言稿．
1．過去對成人的美好向往；
2．現(xiàn)在對成人的初步認識．
注意：1．發(fā)言稿的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）； 2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、身份信息．
 
Good morning，everyone!
 
Thank you for listening．

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分析 亮點句型一：As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．本句是一個復合句，
that I could grow up as soon as possible是hope的賓語從句，so that引導的是一個結(jié)果狀語從句，在這個狀語從句中whatever I wanted 與whatever I liked是賓語從句．
 亮點句型二：Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities．盡管我能夠享受更多的自由，但是同時我意識到作為一個成年人不僅僅意味著自由而且是更多的責任．這是一個由although引導的讓步狀語從句，其中 that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities是一個賓語從句．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
      The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up．"
      As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked（亮點句型一）．【對成人的美好向往】Now I'm a grownup，but I find things do not go as I expected．Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities（亮點句型二）．I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．【對成人的初步認識】To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．【個人觀點闡述】
Thank you for your listening．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．