Question

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，高中畢業(yè)后想到美國弗吉尼亞大學(xué)(University of Virginia)計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè)深造，請根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封入學(xué)申請：

1．性別，年齡，畢業(yè)學(xué)校；   2．學(xué)習(xí)情況及特長；

3．申請入學(xué)的理由；        4．聯(lián)系方式：lihua93@ yahoo. com

注意：1．詞數(shù)：120～150；       2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                               

I look forward to your prompt reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam.

I’m writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university.

First, please allow me to briefly introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I’ll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June. I’m an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects, in particular Internet, Technology and English. This is the reason why I want to major in Computer Science in an English speaking country. I’m also good at computer program design and basketball.

I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoy a good reputation all around the world. It would be a great honor for me to study at your university.

My e-mail address is lihua93@ yahoo.com, and I’ll appreciate it very much if I can receive your reply!

Sincerely yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一封申請書，重點(diǎn)是介紹自己的相關(guān)情況，性別，年齡，畢業(yè)學(xué)校，學(xué)習(xí)情況及特長；申請入學(xué)的理由大部分的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，考生要根據(jù)要求做適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展，但是這樣的擴(kuò)展一定要簡潔，不要啰嗦，在寫作的時(shí)候要注意詞匯的選擇和運(yùn)用，要注意使用高級的句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句等，讓文章的句式多樣化。