Question

假如你是李華，你的好友劉捷今年以較好的成績考取了上海外國語大學(xué)，請你給她寫封信，以分享她成功的快樂。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下三個方面的內(nèi)容：1.對她的成績表示祝賀；2.肯定她付出的努力；3.決心向她學(xué)習(xí)，明年取得好的成績。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：上海外國語大學(xué)：Shanghai International Studies University

Answer 1

Dear Liu Jie,
Haven’t seen you for months! I am extremely happy to know that you have been admitted to Shanghai International Studies University!Congratulations!
There is no doubt that you have devoted a lot to your studies, for which I admire you much! I still remember you told me that if one wants to achieve success, her must have a plan first, and then, stick to it. I will do as you told me.
Now, it is my turn to realize my goal in the coming college entrance examination. I will try my best to work hard and I believe I can also get excellent results like you. Please wait for my good news. I won’t disappoint you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。