Question

【題目】短文改錯：

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Mr. Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony, who enjoyed listening to music very much. So he bought a piano to Tony, hoping that he can become a famous pianist one day. The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed enjoy every minute of it. However, half a year later, he told his father that he was tiring of practising the piano. Heard this, Mr. Smith said, “Tony, it is one thing to be fond of listen to music, and it is another thing to perform skillful by yourself. You can never play the piano well even if you don’t practise more.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】a 8-year-old son改為an

【2】bought a piano to Tony改為for

【3】he can become改為could

【4】put her heart改為his

【5】seemed enjoy every minute在seemed后加to

【6】he was tiring改為tired

【7】Heard this改為Hearing

【8】and it is another thing改為but

【9】perform skillful改為skillfully

【10】well even if去掉even

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】a 8-year-old son改為an 考查冠詞。一個八歲的孩子，eight是元音開頭，故用an.

【2】bought a piano to Tony改為for 考查動詞。Buy sb sth 等于buy sth for sb ,給某人買某物。

【3】he can become改為could 考查情態(tài)動詞。表示對將來的虛擬，所以改為could.

【4】put her heart改為his 考查人稱代詞。Put one’s heart into doing 全心投入做某事，主語是小男孩，所以用他的，his.

【5】seemed enjoy every minute在seemed后加to 考查動詞。句意：他好象很享受每一分鐘。Seem to do 好象做某事。

【6】he was tiring改為tired 考查形容詞。句意：他告訴他的父親他厭倦了彈鋼琴。Be tired of 厭倦了某事。

【7】Heard this改為Hearing 考查非謂語動詞。句意：聽到這，史密斯先生說。兩個句子共用一個主語，主動用doing來表達(dá)。

【8】and it is another thing改為but 考查連詞。句意：喜歡聽音樂是一回事，而獨立優(yōu)美的表演又是另外一回事。兩個句子之間表示轉(zhuǎn)折，故用but.

【9】perform skillful改為skillfully 考查副詞。句意：你自己彈的好又是另外一件事。修飾動詞perform用副詞形式。

【10】well even if去掉even 考查連詞。句意：如果你多加練習(xí)，你不能彈好。Even if 即使，if 如果，兩個句子是條件關(guān)系，故去掉even。