【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧), 并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

When I was seven years old and my sister were only four, our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week after his twenty-seventh birthday. Mom was heartbreaking. Although we were really so young to understand what was going on, but I knew life would never be quite the same. We had a nice home, plenty of that we needed, but we miss our father. About every evening we would go to our grandparents’ house for visit. My grandmother had begun working part-time at Kentucky Fried Chicken. His boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.

【答案】1. were→was 2. week→weeks 3. heartbreaking→heartbroken

4. so→too 5. but去掉 6. that→what 7. miss→missed 8. visit前面加a 9. His→Her 10. which→who

【解析】第一處：考查主謂一致。主語my sister是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞也用第三人稱單數(shù)。故were改為was。

第二處：考查名詞。week“星期”，是可數(shù)名詞，有two修飾用復(fù)數(shù)。故week改為weeks。

第三處：考查形容詞。heartbreaking“令人心碎的”；heartbroken“心碎的”。說明Mom因父親去世而心碎用heartbroken。故heartbreaking改為heartbroken。

第四處：考查too…to…句型。句意：我們真的是太小了以至于不能理解發(fā)生了什么。too…to…“太……以至于不……”是固定句型。故so改為too。

第五處：考查連詞。英語句子不能同時(shí)使用兩個(gè)連詞，有although不能再使用but。故去掉but。

第六處：考查賓語從句。句意：我們有一個(gè)美麗的家，許多我們需要的東西，但是我們失去了父親。介詞后跟what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，what在從句中作賓語，意思是“所有……的事物”；that引導(dǎo)賓語從句僅起引導(dǎo)作用，無詞義，不作成分。故that改為what。

第七處：考查動詞。根據(jù)語境可知，此處描述過去發(fā)生的事情，用一般過去時(shí)。故miss改為missed。

第八處：考查名詞。句意：每天晚上我們都去祖父母家拜訪。visit“拜訪”是可數(shù)名詞，visit以元音音素開頭，泛指一次拜訪，故visit前加a。

第九處：考查代詞。此處指祖母的老板。故His改為Her。

第十處：考查定語從句�！�which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later”是定語從句，修飾man，先行詞指人，在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞who或者that。故which改為who/that。

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