Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Tom 聽說中國爆發(fā)了新型冠狀病毒疫情，非常擔心你的處境，特來信詢問，請你給他寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 感謝他的關心；2. 你的應對措施；3. 你的盼望。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

詞匯：新型冠狀病毒肺炎 novel coronavirus pneumonia；流行病 epidemic

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

With grateful thanks, I’m writing to extend my sincere appreciation for all your care and concern, which is undoubtedly a great encouragement and support for our ongoing anti-coronavirus epidemic campaign.

To check the quick spread of the deadly virus, home quarantine is the top priority for all Chinese. Every family in our city is allowed to do some shopping outside their neighborhood once every two days. As for us students, thanks to various online communication apps, Tencent Class for instance, we interact with our dear “cyber celebrity” teachers through live-streaming classes, but the prolonged screen time takes a heavy toll on my eyes, so I’ve come up with creative indoor relaxations such as dancing, singing and drawing to keep up my health.

I’m definitely convinced that with joint efforts of the whole nation, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. Thanks again and I will be exceedingly delighted to repay your kindness by showing you around my city in the coming summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達是一封書信，假定你是李華，你的英國筆友 Tom 聽說中國爆發(fā)了新型冠狀病毒疫情，非常擔心你的處境，特來信詢問，請你給他寫封回信。

這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，不能遺漏要點：1. 感謝他的關心；2. 你的應對措施；3. 你的盼望。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

根據(jù)寫作要點我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和短語有：extend my sincere appreciation for all your care and concern，a great encouragement and support，as for，thanks to，interact with，come up with，creative indoor relaxations，such as，keep up my health， with joint efforts of the whole nation，win the battle，make a quick recovery，be delighted to，repay your kindness，show sb around�？梢允褂玫你暯釉~：1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列補充關系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯誤。