Question

17．下面這篇短文共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符合（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下劃-橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
A health diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity among children．Take Li Ming as example．Li Ming used to being a healthy boy，but over a year ago，He got into a bad habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．Besides，he spends  a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did few exercise．As a result，she  put on so much weight that he found difficult to climb the stairs．But Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have a balancing healthy diet．He also took an activie part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and play basketball．Months late，Li Ming became as fit as before．

Answer 1

分析 本文以Li Ming 為例告訴我們一味地吃垃圾食品和甜食，不去做運動會導致體重增加，健康的飲食和有規(guī)律的鍛煉可以阻止兒童便肥胖．

解答 A health diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity among children．Take Li Ming as example．Li Ming used to being a healthy boy，but over a year ago，He got into a bad habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．Besides，he spends  a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did few exercise．As a result，she  put on so much weight that he found∧difficult to climb the stairs．But Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have a balancing healthy diet．He also took an activie part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and play basketball．Months late，Li Ming became as fit as before．
詳解：
1．health改為healthy；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞作定語修飾名詞diet．
2．as改為for；考查介詞，take sth for example是固定搭配，意為"以…為例"．
3．being改為be；考查動詞，used to do是固定短語，意為"過去常常…"．
4．a改為the；考查冠詞，habit后面有介詞短語of eating a lot of junk food and snacks限定，故用the表示特指．
5．spends改為spent；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文講的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故用一般過去時．
6．did改為doing；考查并列結構，這里用doing與前面的lying 和watching構成并列成分，
7．she改為he；考查人稱代詞，根據上文的a healthy boy可知此處要用he．
8．found后面加it；考查代詞，這里it在句中做形式賓語，真正的賓語為后面的不定式短語．
9．But改為So；考查連詞，結合上下文分析，后面的decided to change the unhealthy life style是上文內容導致的結果，故用so表示結果．
10．balancing改為balanced；考查分詞作定語，這里diet和動詞balance是動賓關系，故用過去分詞作定語．

點評 短文改錯時首先要掌握短文的中心思想，然后根據上下文語境，分析句式結構，利用所掌握的詞匯，語法等基礎知識找出錯誤加以改正．