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2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分；
3、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
4、答題符號(hào)、格式要規(guī)范：
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
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Photographer Michael Muller was a man without fear．He swims among sharks without the protection of the cage to take quality photos of these beautiful creatures．As scary as that might sound，the top predators are at the bottom of his list of concerns．He's usually far more concerning about all the equipments he brings into the water．"The sharks don't really cause any danger，"Muller says．"I don't use cages----I have surrounded by 150to 200sharks，but not once been close to be bitten．"
Using studio techniques in the wild have made Muller's work to stand out in a crowded field of nature photographers．This week his photos are being featured on the Instagram blog．But he is going to upload some new pictures from Mexico，that he's currently swimming with whale sharks．

分析 本文主要講述攝影師Michael Muller沒有保護(hù)地在鯊魚中游泳，拍攝了一些這些漂亮動(dòng)物的照片．

解答 Photographer Michael Muller was a man without fear．He swims among sharks without the protection of the cage to take quality photos of these beautiful creatures．As scary as that might sound，the top predators are at the bottom of his list of concerns．He's usually far more concerning about all the equipments he brings into the water．"The sharks don't really cause any danger，"Muller says．"I don't use cages----I have∧surrounded by 150to 200sharks，but not once been close to be bitten．"
Using studio techniques in the wild have made Muller's work to stand out in a crowded field of nature photographers．This week his photos are being featured on the Instagram blog．But he is going to upload some new pictures from Mexico，that he's currently swimming with whale sharks．
詳解：
1．was改為is 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述的是一般事實(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
2．the改為a 考查冠詞．是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指．
3．concerning改為concerned 考查固定搭配．be concerned about意為""，是固定搭配．
4．equipments改為equipment 考查名詞．equipment是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．加been 考查動(dòng)詞語態(tài)．I與surround之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)．
6．be改為being 考查動(dòng)名詞．to是介詞，后動(dòng)名詞形式，此處是動(dòng)名詞的一般被動(dòng)式．
7．have改為has 考查主謂一致．主語Using studio techniques是動(dòng)名詞形式，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)形式has．
8．去掉to 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．make后接動(dòng)詞不定式時(shí)省略不定式符號(hào)to，即接動(dòng)詞原形．
9．But改為And 考查連詞．前后兩個(gè)分句之間是順承關(guān)系，用連詞and．
10．that改為where 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞Mexico在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語，用關(guān)系副詞where．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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