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【題目】書面表達(dá)（共三節(jié)，滿分30分）

第一節(jié)：?jiǎn)尉涓腻e(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

【1】Art is influenced by customs and faith of a people. Styles in Western art have changed many times.

【2】Some of the first poetry a young child learns in English are nursery rhymes.

【3】My first visit was a space station considered the most modern in space.

【4】To prevent this from happening again, John Snow suggested that the source of all the water supplies examined.

【5】Copernicus' theory is now the basis which all our ideas of the universe are built.

【6】He did not want to be attacked by the Christian Church, so he only published it as he lay die in 1543.

【7】It is an imaginary line divide the eastern and western halves of the world and is very useful for navigation.

【8】Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris.

【9】With so many different forms of poetry to choose, students may eventually want to write poems of their own.

【10】The second theory suggested that people should absorbed this disease into their bodies with their meals.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】by后面加the

【2】are改為is

【3】was后加to

【4】examined改為be examined

【5】which前加on

【6】die改為dying

【7】divide改為dividing

【8】painting后家were

【9】choose后加from

【10】should去掉；into their bodies with their meals去掉

【解析】

【1】by后面加the。be influenced by是固定搭配“被……影響”后面接名詞，customs and faith of a people 做介詞賓語(yǔ)，意思是人們的習(xí)慣和信仰。名詞前面必須加冠詞，因此customs和faith前本應(yīng)有一個(gè)冠詞修飾，但是當(dāng)and連接的兩個(gè)名詞從屬于同一中心詞時(shí)，則只用在第一個(gè)名詞前加定冠詞the。

【2】are改為is 。從句中看出 Some of the first poetry a young child learns in English 整體作為句子的主語(yǔ)，后面的be動(dòng)詞為句子謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，主語(yǔ)中包含了一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，first poetry是先行詞，在從句中做賓語(yǔ)，因此省略了引導(dǎo)詞which。所以主語(yǔ)的主干為some，of的介詞短語(yǔ)修飾some，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該使用單數(shù)形式。故將are改為is

【3】was后加to。句意為我首次訪問了被認(rèn)為是最現(xiàn)代化的空間站。因此considered the most modern in space.做定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面的太空站，space station 為表語(yǔ)，前面必須接to提示地點(diǎn)否則句意發(fā)生改變，成為韋德第一次旅行是太空站

【4】examined改為be examined。在suggest所引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句中主語(yǔ)為the source of all the water supplies examined為謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，根據(jù)句意知水供應(yīng)來(lái)源應(yīng)被檢查，故應(yīng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)be done形式。故在examined前面加一個(gè)be

【5】which前加on。在這個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句中the basis為先行詞。其固定搭配為the basis on 因此這是一個(gè)不及物動(dòng)詞，不能直接放在從句的動(dòng)詞后面，必須加上介詞on，所以應(yīng)在which前或built后加上on

【6】die改為dying。句子后半部分中as引導(dǎo)了一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，lay是謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，同一句子中不能有兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，因此die不能使用原形，應(yīng)使用v-ing形式，die分詞形式為dying因此lay dying表示奄奄一息彌留之際

【7】divide改為dividing 。it is an imaginary line 為句子主干，后面的為一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句補(bǔ)充說明line。Divide為主動(dòng)，因此使用v-ing形式，修飾前面的先行詞line

【8】painting后家were。句子前半部分為一個(gè)介詞短語(yǔ)和一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句who broke away from the traditional style of painting，句子主干為painters，因此缺乏謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，所以必須在the impressionist 前面加上be動(dòng)詞，由下面的lived和worked可知，應(yīng)保持時(shí)態(tài)一致，因此加上謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞were

【9】choose后加from 。choose是一個(gè)不及物動(dòng)詞，當(dāng)其后面接賓語(yǔ)時(shí)必須加上介詞from，因此在不定式中，當(dāng)前面的名詞與后動(dòng)詞形成動(dòng)賓關(guān)系時(shí)choose后面的介詞不能省略

【10】should去掉；into their bodies with their meals去掉。suggest可以表示建議，或暗示，表明，當(dāng)他表示建議時(shí)應(yīng)該使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，should加動(dòng)詞原形，但是當(dāng)其表示暗示，表明時(shí)則不用虛擬。在該句中suggest是暗示的意思，因此不用should。并且absorb就是吸收的意思，與后面的介詞短語(yǔ)意思重復(fù)了，因此需刪掉。