Question

假設你是王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請根據(jù)下列要點，用英文給李華寫一篇畢業(yè)留言。
要點：1. 簡要表述李華在你心目中的印象；
　　　2. 用一到兩個相關的事例進行具體描述；
　　　3. 對他李華表示美好的的祝愿。
注意：1. 內(nèi)容積極向上，語意連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。詞數(shù)120左右。
2. 不能寫成詩歌形式；不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。
3. 開頭已給出。
Dear Li Hua,
It’s time to say goodbye. ________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,
It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.
Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.
I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!
Yours,
Wang Ping

試題分析：考查提綱類作文寫作，重點考查考生的書面表達的能力。畢業(yè)留言的話題應該是中學生熟悉，有話可寫的素材，因此難度并不大。把握三個要點：1.簡要表述李華在你心目中的印象;2.用一到兩個相關的事例進行具體描述; 3.對他李華表示美好的的祝愿。注意組織鍛煉和過渡�？忌�在寫作時，一定要緊扣寫作要點進行寫作，三個要點都十分重要，如果考生能夠在緊扣寫作要點的基礎上，抓住語言的準確性，再寫出幾個亮點詞匯和句式，得到高分應該比較輕松。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言流暢，句式變化多樣：It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. 這句話用了固定句型和定語從句，You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. 這句話用了定語從句和省略句，You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. 這句話用了定語從句和賓語從句， When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. 這句話用了強調(diào)句， Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. 這句話用了虛擬語氣， May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!這兩句話都用了虛擬語氣。