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5．銀川一中的校刊英語專欄正在開始以"健康的生活方式"為主題的英語征文活動，你打算參加．請根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇英語短文．
1．營養(yǎng)均衡的膳食； 2．經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉；  3．樂觀的人生態(tài)度．
注意：1．字數(shù)：100左右．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
All of us want to live a happy life．                                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To begin with，it's important that we should have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．首先，我們應(yīng)該有一個平衡的飲食，因為我們需要充足的營養(yǎng)以使身體成長．
高分句型二：
In addition，taking exercise regularly is of equal importance，which can help us keep fit and release stress．除此以外，有規(guī)律的鍛煉是同等重要的，那可以幫助我們保持健康釋放壓力．
句型一 ①it's important that we should have a balanced diet 該句是一個由it充當形式主語，后面跟一個由that引導(dǎo)的主語從句 ②because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．該句是一個由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句
句型二 ①taking exercise regularly is of equal importance 該句是一個動名詞短語作主語的句子，動名詞或者動名詞短語作主語時，謂語應(yīng)注意使用單數(shù) ②which can help us keep fit and release stress 該句是hi一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語，替代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 All of us want to live a healthy life．The following are some useful tips．
   To begin with，it's important that we should have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．（高分句型一）Not only should we take in enough grains and meat，but we should also eat fruits and vegetables．In addition，taking exercise regularly is of equal importance，which can help us keep fit and release stress．（高分句型二）More importantly，we should develop a positive attitude，which allows us to look at things positively，no matter what happens．Even if we are in a difficult situation，we should never lose hope．（方法羅列）
   Proper food，regular exercise and a positive attitude will help us live a healthy life．（總結(jié)全文）

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．