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Dear Jennifer,

    I’m more than gladly to have received your e-mail yesterday. Thank you very much for your kind invitation to your birthday party to be holding this Sunday. However,I regretted to tell you that I won’t able to come. My grandmother has been ill in hospital receiving a treatment. My parents are quite busy these days,but I have to stay at home,helping with the houseworks,I’ve bought a gift to you and our friend Linda will bring them to you. I do wish you a happy birthday. You can depend on it that I will come to see you unless I am free.

Yours,

Lin Ling 

閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個(gè)單詞) 或括號(hào)內(nèi) 單詞的正確形式。

                Are we too clean?

    In some parts of the world,it seems that 21 (keep) things too clean may cause a health problem. Parents often think that children are always getting dirty. But the 22 (true) is that in countries like the UK,parents clean their homes so carefully 23 children hardly ever come into contact with dirt,and therefore germs (細(xì)菌). The result is that one person in ten today 24(suffer) from some kind of allergy (過(guò)敏反應(yīng)) 一three times more than just ten years ago.

    Parents who think back to how they used to play as a child will see how much things 25 (change) . Children today spend a lot of time in their rooms. Twenty years ago,our parents thought it was better for kids 26 (play) outside,so we would spend 27 (much) time in the park than at home. We always fell over, 28 we just brushed 29 (our) clean and then kept on playing.

    Now research seems to suggest that this is 30 good thing. Early contact with germs helps to protect our bodies against allergies later in life.

There is always something to be thankful for

    A famous writer was in his study. He picked up his pen and wrote:

** Last year,I had an operation and my gall bladder (膽嚢) was removed. I was stuck in bed due to this operation for a long time.

** The same year I reached 60 and had to give up my favourite job.

** The same year I experienced the sorrow of the death of my father.

** And the same year my son had a car accident. He had to stay in hospital for several days. The destruction of the car was another loss.

    At the end he wrote: It was such a bad year!

    When the writer's wife entered the room,she found her husband looking sad. From behind his back she read what was written on the paper. She left the room silently and came back with another piece of paper and placed it on. the side of her husband's writing.

    The writer saw the paper which read:

** Last year I finally got rid of my gall bladder due to which I had spent years in pain.

** I turned 60 with sound health and got retired from my job. Now I can make good use of my time to write something better with more focus and peace.

** The same year my father,at the age of . 95,passed away without depending on anyone and without any serious condition.

** The same year,my son was blessed (保佑) with a new life. My car was destroyed but my son survived. 一

    At the end she wrote: This year was a great blessing and it passed well!

    See!The couple had different viewpoints on the same incidents. In our daily lives we should see that it's not happiness that makes us grateful but gratefulness that makes US happy. There is always something to be thankful for!

Translate the underlined paragrah into Chinese.

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               Volunteer teaching ?n Sur?n,Thailand

    Surin,the heart of Thailand,is well-known for its beautiful sight and friendly local people. To the north of Surin is the valley of the Mun River,and to the south is the great Dongrek mountains. For those who want to escape to a much simpler way of life,Sunn is the best choice.

    Our hands-on teaching volunteer experience gives you the chance to help children through teaching. You* 11 be given all the necessary training to have an exciting and educational lesson. Your working place will be in a Thai government school. The school day starts at 8:30 am and ends at 3:30 pm,which means that you’ 11 have plenty of free time in the evening to relax or explore the local area.

                  Schedule

. Day 1 Arrive in Bangkok 

Touch down in Bangkok and head to your guesthouse on the famous Khao San road. Have a guesthouse on the famous Khao San road. Have a rest and then do some local exploring until you meet the rest of the volunteers in the evening.

. Day 2  Bangkok tour

Explore some of the city’ s  most famous places such as temples and palaces. Tour the Klongs of Bangkok on an exciting boat ride.

. Day 3  Go to Surin 

Take a train to Surin,live in yòur volunteer home and then get all the information about the volunteer project.

. Day 4  Meet the students

Yo? will get the chance to meet everyone an 4 introduce yourself to everyone at the school you will be volunteering at.

. Day 5-7 Teaching time,8. 30 am - 3. 30 pm,Monday - Thursday 

Teach English in a Thai government school and provide the children with valuable life skills and learn about Thai life at the same time. A truly interesting experience!

. Day 8-10 Free time in Surin 

Relax during your time off by exploring Surin or visiting nearby Cambodia on the weekend.

13. What do we know about Sunn according to Paragraph 1 ?

   A. It is a poor place.

   B. It is located in the south of Thailand,

   C. The local people live a simple life.

   D. There are many rivers and mountains there.

14. When may the volunteers travel around Surin during weekdays?

   A. At night. B. In the morning,

   C. At noon. D. In the late afternoon.

15. How will the volunteers explore the Klongs of Bangkok?

   A. By bus. B. By train,

   C. By boat. D. On foot.

16. On which day can the volunteers visit Cambodia?

   A. Day 1.   B. Day 3.

   C. Day 6.   D. Day 9. 

               C ★★★★☆

    Following the crowd may not always be in a person's best interest. But new research suggests something different. Scientists have known that close friendships help health. Lonely people are more likely to get sick. That's true for both teens and adults. Those findings inspired Joseph Allen and his team to look at teen behavior.

    So they followed 171 teens,starting when the kids were just 13. The same 171 people were interviewed again as adults,at ages 25,26 and 27. Whether teens held in their feelings or expressed them to a close companion also influenced their later health. Those who held in their feelings were more likely to become sick as adults. What’s more,the study found that teens who went along with what their friends wanted,rather than being independent,were also healthier in their twenties.

    The (關(guān)系) held up even after the scientists took other possible influences on health into consideration. Weight,family income and drug use were all examined. Going along with the crowd may have benefits,says Allen,but there are also weak points. Teens who are more independent are likely to do better in school. And peer ^essure may lead some kids to. do risky thi?gs.

    Tara Dumas is ? (心理學(xué)家) in London. She says that the study’s findings not only are interesting but alsft emphasize the value of teen friendships. She wants to know what will happen when peers encourage each other to behave in ways that are unhealthy,such as smoking or drinking. She wonders whether those friendships will still lead to healthier adults.

    Dealing with peer pressure is a challenge. It is not as simple as just saying ‘no” ” Allen says. “Finding the right balance is the key. Parents need to understand fhe pressures teens face,” he adds.

9. What is the main idea of the text?

   A. It's not easy to get along with peers.

   B. It's important to deal with teens’ pressure.

    C. Adults should pay attention to teens’ health.

   D. Teen friendships may make healthier adults.

10. According to Allen,a boy who doesn’t like following the crowd may .

   A. do well in school work

   B. have an unsuccessful life

    C. end up smoking or drinking

    D. easily become overweight 

11. Tara Dumas seems ?

   A. excited to encourage friendships

   B. unwilling to let teens make friends

    C. doubtful about unlimited friendships

   D. happy with what teen friends do together

12. What should parents do according to the text?

   A. They should learn to say no to teens.

   B. They should think based on teens’ situation.

    C. They should encourage teens to be independent.

   D. They should make a balance between work and family.

           B ★★★☆☆

    Grace o’ Brien,19. is the founder of Ears for Years — an organization that hands out low-cost , 見(jiàn)泣(太陽(yáng)能助聽(tīng)器) to children in developing countries. The college student has handed them out to kids in five different countries around the world so far.

    O’ Brien was inspired to found Ears for Years after seeing her father experience hearing loss. To further understand the condition,Brien volunteered at a summer theater (劇院) camp for children who were deaf. There,she wanted to find a way to make hearing aids to help more families who couldn’ t  afford them.

    “I've learned how powerful solutions are O’ Brien said. “There’ re so many problems we come across in our daily lives,but often people pass up these chances to find solutions."

    After doing some research,she came across Solar Ear,a Brazil-based company that makes low-cost hearing aids,especially aimed at children. These hearing aids are lightweight,cost about $100 and are equipped with rechargeable batteries that last up to three years,while standard hearing aids can cost up to $1,000 and have a much shorter life.

    According to the WHO, 32 million children worldwide live with hearing loss and most of them are in poor countries. But present hearing aids meet less than 10 percent of the need of the world. O’Brien would like to change that by making the solar-powered hearing aids available to families in need around the world. S? far,she's brought Solar Ear's products to Mexico,Sri Lanka,South Korea,Nicaragua and Honduras. And she has done something to make a difference in other people's lives.

5. What led Grace o’ Brien to found Ears for Years?

   A. Her father’ s experience.

   B. Her work experience in Solar Ear.

    C. Her experience at a summer theater camp.

   D. Her knowledge about solar-powered products.

6. The underlined phrase “pass up” in Paragraph 3 probably means .

   A. find   B. miss   C. like   D. create

7. Compared with standard hearing aids,the solar-

-powered hearing aids .

   A. are more expensive

   B. have a longer life 

    C. are better-looking   

    D. are heavier

8. What might o' Brien do in the future?

   A. To build a school for the deaf.

   B. To found a new company selling hearing aids,

    C. To learn how to make solar-powered hearing aids.

   D. To help more families get solar-powered hearing aids.

                   A  ★★★☆☆

    Thanks to a loyal dog and a group of volunteers,two dogs were found safe after being lost in the woods in the state of Washington for a week. Tillie,the kind dog,stayed with her doggie friend Phoebe for a week. She left each day to find help. Phoebe was trapped in a dry concrete pool in a ravine ( where Tillie stood guard.

    The nonprofit animal rescue organization Vashon Island Pet Protectors (Ⅵ. P) had posted photos of the dogs on their Facebook page,hoping someone would catch sight of them. On Sept. 14,they received a call saying that while they were out on thei? (房屋及院落) ，a reddish dog had come up to them a few times,before heading right back into a ravine.

    Based on the information,volunteers made their way into the ravine,said Amy Carey of Ⅵ. P. After a bit of searching,the volunteers heard a small response (回應(yīng)) when they called out to Tillie. A few minutes later they found her lying beside the? old pool with her head resting on the concrete wall. “They knew that meant Phoebe was inside the well. Every breath was held and everyone prayed (iff #) that the effort of searching the well would end in finding her safe,” Carey said. Both dogs were cold and hungry but are well now.

    Carey reminds people who lose their dogs to keep looking for them. uHope is a very hard thing to keep open and alive in the face of heartbreak^ but is so important for happy endings for missing pets,” she said.

1. Why did Tillie leave her friend every day?

   A. She wanted to search for food.

   B. She acted as a guard near the pool.

    C. She wanted to play with the volunteers.

   D. She tried to find someone to save Phoebe.

2. VIPP posted photos of the dogs on a website to

   A. look for the lost dogs

   B. show how to protect dogs

    C. look for the owner of the dogs

   D. praise the loyal and clever dogs

3. While the volunteers were saving the dog,they were .

   A. excited   B. puzzled

    C. worried   D. disappointed

4. Which of the following might Carey agree with?

   A. Never hurt pet dogs.

   B. Never give up missing dogs.

    C. Few missing pets have happy endings.

   D. We should learn to deal with heartbreak.

    閱讀下面短文，從短文后各題所給的四個(gè)選項(xiàng) (A、B、C和D) 中，選出可以填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)。

    The last thing Kim Powell-Woods wanted for her birthday was a newspaper story. But her day on Wednesday was just too 21 to ignore. Instead of a traditional 22 with gifts and a birthday cake,the woman wanted 23 . For her 35th birthday,she planned to do 35 acts of kindness for 24 .

   “I thought of it a couple weeks ago,and I sat down one afternoon and 25 making a list of things I could do，“ she said. Her job as a 911 operator （接線員) put her in touch with people who were having veiy 26 days. She wanted a day when she might help people have a good day.

    She started at 5 a.m. At a 27 station,she helped a woman who was trying to 28 some household things. She needed money to buy gas to get to work. Kim 29 that gas. The woman smiled at her with a look of 30 . Kim had made some 31 the night before and packed lunches for other strangers. She 32 the lunches at the bus stop at noon. She 33 what it was like to ride the bus and have no plan for 34 . It was a feeling of sadness.

    She some bus tokens (代幣) for other people and 36 dropped off gifts at the Salvation Army,Harbor House and some homeless shelters. uAnd my daughter told me about a (n) 37 who needed a lift at her school,38 I took meals from McDonald's out there. I’11 probably 39 this again,but I’ll wait for a 40 day,like my 40th birthday,she said.

21. A. boring   B. quiet   C. unusual   D. terrible

22. A. conference   B. celebration    C. performance   D. program

23. A. smiles   B. kisses    C. comfort   D. freedom

24. A. families   B. strangers   C. friends   D. neighbors

25. A. avoided   B. stopped   C. regretted   D. started

26. A. great   B. different   C. bad   D. strange

27. A. train   B. bus   C. radio   D. gas

28. A. share   B. throw   C. sell   D. repair

29. A. worried about   B. looked for    C. depended on   D. paid for

30. A. forgiveness   B. thankfulness    C. pride   D. fear

31. A. sandwiches   B. models   C. clothes   D. notes

32. A. gave away   B. thought of   C. picked up   D. searched for

33. A. enjoyed   B. explained   C. knew   D. reported

34. A. house   B. honor   C. dress   D. lunch

35. A. borrowed   B. bought   C. produced   D. wasted

36. A. also   B. again   C. seldom   D. never

37. A. actor   B. customer   C. student   D. doctor

38. A. because   B. or   C. before   D. so

39. A. accept   B. do   C. show   D. forget

40. A. big   B. rainy   C. short   D. busy

             listening to the clay 

    When I was a young girl,my father would drop me off at my art class every Saturday morning. Classes were held in the basement of an old building that had been converted into an art school. I loved that basement.

    I was determined that my own children would take Saturday art classes. I love those mornings,sitting next to my children and watching them clay(黏土) into dragons,bears,etc. If the g/aze (釉) didn’t turn out like we thought,our wise teacher would tell us with a smile that our unexpected results were “gifts from the (爐) .” She Was encouraging US not to judge our work or ourselves so harshly (苛刻地) but to be free to accent unexpected results willingly. She let US be open to new ways of seeing things,creating,and solving problems,without judgment.

    My son started class at age six. When he was handed his first ball of clay,he pushed his finger deeply into the center and said, “Mom,I can feel the heartbeat of the clay." This was the beginning of a lifetime of learning from my children. Years later,when I got particularly frustrated with my inability to make the clay take the shape I had imagined,I remembered my son’s discovery. I took the pwlse (脈搏) of the clay. I asked what it wanted to be. I discovered that my best pieces are done in partnership with the clay.

    The work I did in the art school helps my later work. I have learned to take the pulse of life and take note of what other people want and need. Now,wherever I am,I remain open to the “gifts from the kiln.”

1. V. to change or make sth change from one form,purpose,system,etc. to another (in Paragraph 1)

2. adj. feeling annoyed and impatient because you can't do or achieve what you want (in Paragraph 4)

             B    ★★★★☆

    Susan Cain was such a shy girl that she did not want Other people to look at her. But when she grew up Susan chose to be a lawyer,which is usually for a bold(大膽的) person. But Susan thinks that her shyness has made her a better lawyer.

    She said, “At first I had the idea that I would be disadvantaged. But I quickly found that was not true.I’m good at listening to people,which helps me build relationships with others. These would also make me very powerful.”

    Almost half of all people say that they are shy. Social scientists studied young adults in eight countries across the world. They found that in Japan 57% of people said that they were shy. The lowest number was in Israel,only 31%. In most countries,bout 40% of the population said they were shy.

    Scientists say that it is because of two things: genetic（遺傳） character and life experience. They did a study of two-month-old babies. Of every five babies,one was very active. Some people become shy because of what has happened to them. For example,children who are always blamed (責(zé)備)by their family can be shy. But good experiences can help sensitive children become active.

    Shy people may feel that they have a disadvantage in their social life and their work. But shyness can be an advantage. Many shy people have good characters. They are gooasfriends because they listen more than they talk. They are much less likely to cheat or lie even when they think they cannot be caught. Studies show that they are much more likely to show.?ympí?ty (同情) for others.

    Shy people may not have a choice about being shy. But they can learn to use the good qualities they have. In this way they can do something good with their shy character.

5. As an adult,Susan thinks that her shyness .

   A. has made her be afraid of looking at others

   B. has helped her become a powerful lawyer 

    C. has negative effects on her career

   D. means she has fewer new friends

6. The study in Paragraph 3 has found that .

   A. most people are shy

   B. adults are shyer than kids

    C. people in Israel are the shyest   

    D. shyness is common among people

7. What is Paragraph 4 mainly about?

   A. The disadvantages of shyness.

   B. The ways to get rid of shyness.

    C. The reasons why some people are shy.

   D. The influences of shyness on people's life.

8. According to the text,shy people .

   A. are more likely to be honest

   B. seldom show sympathy for others

    C. find it hard to focus on what others say   

    D. often make mistakes that upset their parents