20.假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文.文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
I am English student studying in China.Yesterday,I go to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,and I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.First,the film was delayed as there was so many advertisements at the beginning.It was rather annoyed.Second,the sound of the film was such loud that I could hardly bear it.The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly,that presented potential safety problems.If something terrible should happen,it would be difficult for people to get out quick.As a visitor to your city,I'm disappointed with my experience in you cinema.I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and to make some improvements.