7.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處,每處只涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用(\)劃掉;
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:(1)每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均只限一詞.
(2)只允許修改10處,多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分.
Dear Martin,
How are you doing recently?Learned that you have retired,we all miss you.On behalf of my schoolmates,I?m written the letter to express our deepest thanks to you.
We?re grateful for you have done for us over the years.It is you that helped us make great progresses in our English.When some students got into trouble,you suggested they improved their learning methods and always helped us out with patience.We still remember what fun we had when you told jokes in class.All of us value the precious time when we spent together.We will keep it on mind forever.
We true wish you good health and a wonderful life after retirement!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.