2.結(jié)尾萬能公式二:如此建議如果說“如此結(jié)論 是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話.那么“如此建議 應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了.因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話.但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型.拽! Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. 這里的虛擬語氣用得很經(jīng)典.因?yàn)榭脊俦緛斫?jīng)?歼@個(gè)句型.而如果我們自己寫出來.你說考官會怎么想呢? 更多句型: Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 二.寫作的七項(xiàng)基本原則 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可見.長短句結(jié)合.抑揚(yáng)頓挫.豈不爽哉?牢記! 強(qiáng)烈建議:在文章第一段用一長一短.且先長后短,在文章主體部分.要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思.然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長的句群形式.定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長一短就可以了. 特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的! To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly. 1)first, second, third, last 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3)the first, the second, the third, the last 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand 10)for one thing, for another thing 建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意.平時(shí)說話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚! I cannot bear it. 可以用短語表達(dá):I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短語表達(dá):I am looking forward to it. 這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加.表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確. 五.多實(shí)少虛原則原因很簡單.寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西.不要空話連篇.這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞.少用虛詞.我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞.比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候.不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞.應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之類的形象詞.再比如: 走出房間.general的詞是:walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說:slip out of the room 小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說:sail out of the room 小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說:dance out of the room 老人走出房間應(yīng)該說:stagger out of the room 所以多用實(shí)詞.少用虛詞.文章將會大放異彩! 六.多變句式原則 1)加法 都希望寫下很長的句子.像個(gè)老外似的.可就是怕寫錯.怎么辦.最保險(xiǎn)的寫長句的方法就是這些.可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系.比如說: I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的.我們可以用一個(gè)超級句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短語可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2)轉(zhuǎn)折 批評某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候.我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn).然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題.再說缺點(diǎn).這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn).可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受.所以呢.我們說話的時(shí)候.只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話.注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了. The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短語: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果 昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩.然后我主動搭訕.然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d.然后我們認(rèn)識了.然后我們成為了朋友-可見.講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序.先什么.后什么.所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了.其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系! The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短語: then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4)失衡句(頭重腳輕.或者頭輕腳重) 有些人腦袋大.身體小.或者有些人腦袋小.身體大.雖然我們不希望長成這個(gè)樣子.可如果真的是這樣了.也就必然會吸引別人的注意力.文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子.就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同.其實(shí)就是主語從句.表語從句.賓語從句的變形. 舉例:This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同樣主語.賓語.表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分: When to go, Why he goes away- 5)附加 如果有了老婆.總會遇到這樣的情況.當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候.她會插一句說.我昨天見過他,或者說.就是某某某.如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面.那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語. The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其實(shí)很簡單.同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成,定語從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中.但是whom or that關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前. 6)排比 文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此.如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話.那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句.一個(gè)個(gè)得對偶句.一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式.一個(gè)個(gè)地詞.一個(gè)個(gè)的短語.如此表達(dá)將會使文章有排山倒海之勢! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. 要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可! 七.挑戰(zhàn)極限原則既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限.必然是比較難的.但是并非不可攀! 原理:在學(xué)生的文章中.很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子.其實(shí)也很簡單.只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會.它就是分詞的一種特殊形式.分詞要求主語一致.而獨(dú)立主格則不然.比如: The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 如果您可一些出這樣的句子.不得高分才怪! In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. 更多句型: To take-as an example, One example is-, Another exampleis-, for example 相似的比較: in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比較: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with -,- 實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)!下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字I love you! I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. 或者上面我們舉過的例子: I cannot bear it. 可以用短語表達(dá):I cannot put up with it. 因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. 更多短語: in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply. 查看更多

 

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假設(shè)你是John, 你的筆友李華口語不好,他來信請你談?wù)勀愕囊庖。你給他寫一封回信。提出以下看法和建議:
1. 在課堂上要積極發(fā)言,多爭取說英語的機(jī)會。如果說錯,老師會幫助你糾正錯誤。
2. 在課內(nèi)課外盡可能多地說英語,熟能生巧。
3. 找一個(gè)喜歡說英語的同學(xué)共同實(shí)踐,相互幫助。
4. 不要失去信心,不要怕說錯,不要怕別人譏笑。
5. 只要堅(jiān)持下去,一定能提高英語口語水平。
注意:1. 詞數(shù):120-150.
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
3.信的開頭界唯一為你寫好。
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
John

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假設(shè)你是John, 你的筆友李華口語不好,他來信請你談?wù)勀愕囊庖。你給他寫一封回信。提出以下看法和建議:

1. 在課堂上要積極發(fā)言,多爭取說英語的機(jī)會。如果說錯,老師會幫助你糾正錯誤。

2. 在課內(nèi)課外盡可能多地說英語,熟能生巧。

3. 找一個(gè)喜歡說英語的同學(xué)共同實(shí)踐,相互幫助。

4. 不要失去信心,不要怕說錯,不要怕別人譏笑。

5. 只要堅(jiān)持下去,一定能提高英語口語水平。

注意:1. 詞數(shù):120-150.

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

3.信的開頭界唯一為你寫好。

Dear Li Hua,

Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

John

 

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假設(shè)你是John, 你的筆友李華口語不好,他來信請你談?wù)勀愕囊庖。你給他寫一封回信。提出以下看法和建議:

1. 在課堂上要積極發(fā)言,多爭取說英語的機(jī)會。如果說錯,老師會幫助你糾正錯誤。

2. 在課內(nèi)課外盡可能多地說英語,熟能生巧。

3. 找一個(gè)喜歡說英語的同學(xué)共同實(shí)踐,相互幫助。

4. 不要失去信心,不要怕說錯,不要怕別人譏笑。

5. 只要堅(jiān)持下去,一定能提高英語口語水平。

注意:1.  詞數(shù):120-150.

      2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

3.信的開頭界唯一為你寫好。

Dear Li Hua,

   Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

                                                           John

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目前,越來越多的市民是飼養(yǎng)寵物(貓和狗)。作為一名中學(xué)生,你耳聞目睹養(yǎng)寵物已泛濫成災(zāi),甚至還發(fā)生寵物傷人事件。與此同時(shí),寵物也給我們生活帶來快樂,針對這一社會現(xiàn)象,你班舉行了一場熱烈的辯論,辯論的情況如下:

反對飼養(yǎng)寵物的同學(xué)認(rèn)為

支持飼養(yǎng)寵物的同學(xué)認(rèn)為

1.     造成環(huán)境污染

2.     吵鬧聲,甚至傷人

1. 安慰孤寡老人

2.    人與動物和諧相處,增添生活情趣


注意:1. 文章的開頭已為你寫好2.文章結(jié)尾說明自己的觀點(diǎn)或建議。3. 詞數(shù):100左右

   Recently we have a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.

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假如你叫李華,請給某英文報(bào)社寫一封信,反映如下情況并談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh。

       1.現(xiàn)在有許多同學(xué)使用手機(jī),原因一是認(rèn)為時(shí)髦,二是認(rèn)為便于同家人和朋友聯(lián)系。

       2.一些學(xué)生把手機(jī)帶進(jìn)教室,課堂上的鈴聲影響了課堂紀(jì)律。有的同學(xué)還在課堂上發(fā)短信,浪費(fèi)了寶貴的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間。

      建議:……

      注意:1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); 2.詞數(shù):100字左右

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student.Now many students use mobile phones.

                                                                                

 

                                                                              

                                                                               

 

                                                                               

Your sincerely,

                                                            Li Hua

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