Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師Mrs. Green 一直保持聯(lián)系。近日她來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的近況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。

（1）簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；

（2）告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn)備（如深入了解天津等）；

（3）希望她有機(jī)會(huì)重訪天津。

注意：

（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；

（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

（3）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì) the 13th National Games

Dear Mrs. Green,

I’m glad to hear from you.

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Yours,

Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mrs Green,__

I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.

I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.

I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again.

Yours，

Li Jin

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