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【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)下面提示，完成短文。題目“My Ideal School”。詞數(shù)80左右。

1.起床晚，所以希望上學晚，放學早。有很多的空余時間。

2學校餐廳大而明亮。可以在那里吃飯或聊天。

3.每天都上電腦課。每人一臺電腦，可以玩游戲。

4.有藏書豐富的圖書館，網(wǎng)球場和游泳池。

5.作業(yè)少，課外活動多。周末不用做作業(yè)。

Answer 1

【答案】My Ideal School

I often get up late, so my ideal school starts at 9 a.m. It finishes at 3 p.m., so we will have more free time to play games. There is a big and bright dining hall. We can eat and chat there. We can have computer lessons every day. Everyone has a computer to play computer games. My ideal school has a library with lots of books, and it also has a tennis court and a swimming pool. We want to have less homework and more after-school activities. It will be better if we do not have to do any homework at weekends.

【解析】

本文是一篇提綱作文。要求根據(jù)提綱內容寫一篇關于自己理想學校的文章。在寫作之前要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。注意必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。這篇作文層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。用了大量短語，如want to do, after-school activities, have to do, at weekends, get up late等，為文章增色不少。