Question

【題目】文段表達(dá)

從下面兩個題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于60詞的文段寫作。所給提示詞語僅供選用，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。請不要寫出真實班級與姓名。

題目①

上周日，Lily所在的志愿者小組參加了社區(qū)的志愿者活動。請你根據(jù)所給圖片，描述他們所參加的所有志愿者活動，并談?wù)勀闶欠裨敢獬蔀橹驹刚呒袄碛伞?/span>

提示問題:

1. What did Lily and her volunteer group do last Sunday?

2. Do you want to be a volunteer? Why?

提示詞語:

pick up the trash, cheer up sb., call on sb. to do sth., be willing to do sth., make a difference

Last Sunday, Lily and her volunteer group _________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

題目②

快節(jié)奏的生活以及激烈的競爭使大多數(shù)中學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)、生活上產(chǎn)生了或多或少的壓力。為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)并解決同學(xué)們的心理壓力問題，學(xué)校要開展以“Less Stress, Better Life”為主題的英語演講比賽。請準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勍瑢W(xué)中普遍存在的壓力以及你的壓力所在，并分享一些緩解壓力的好辦法。

提示問題:

1. What’s the common stress for your classmates?

2. What’s your stress?

3. How do you deal with your stress?

提示詞語:

feel nervous, be harmful to, relieve one’s stress, get relaxed, arrange one’s time, listen to music, do sports, do some reading

Nowadays, more and more teenagers are stressed out because of the fast-paced lifestyle and great competition from schoolwork. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】①

Last Sunday, Lily and her volunteer group spent the whole day volunteering in the neighborhood. First, they helped to do the clean-up. Then, they visited the sick kids and sang for lonely seniors to cheer them up. What’s more, they gave a talk to call up everyone to put their love to good use by volunteering.

In my opinion, being a volunteer is great! Not only can we take the chance to do something enjoyable and meaningful, but also we should take the responsibility to fill the world with more love. Only in this way can we make it a better one for us to live in.

②

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think it is necessary to have a conversation with parents to solve the problem．

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

作文要求從2道題目中任選一題作答。題目①為Lily所在的志愿者小組參加了社區(qū)的志愿者活動。需要根據(jù)圖片描述所有志愿者活動，并談?wù)勀銓χ驹刚叩目捶�。題目②是一篇演講稿，主要談?wù)勍瑢W(xué)中普遍存在的壓力以及你的壓力，并分享一些緩解壓力的好辦法。

題目①是一篇圖片類作文。在寫此類作文時，我們最好不要漏掉其中的要點(diǎn)，行文注意簡化，不要拖沓冗長，適當(dāng)寫幾個復(fù)合句比較用易得高分。但同時注意，適當(dāng)用幾個連接詞，使文章顯得有層次感。同時，在作文完成的時候注意檢查、修改，如果有條件的話最好能夠先打個草稿，再抄到答題紙上，方能成為一篇好文章。

題目②這是一篇提綱類作文。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。