16.假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的美國(guó)筆友Chris在給你的郵件中提到他最近在準(zhǔn)備SAT考試(美國(guó)高考),心理壓力很大,很苦惱,希望得到你的幫助.請(qǐng)你給他回信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.安慰對(duì)方;
2.分析心理壓力過(guò)大會(huì)導(dǎo)致的后果;
3.給出相應(yīng)的建議及其理由.
注意:詞數(shù)不少于150.
Dear Chris,
I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test.(高分句型一)Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress.But don't worry too much,or you may find yourself having problems with sleep,appetite,or even memory.Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.
The first thing you can try is to exercise.Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence.(高分句型二)Another way is to enjoy some games with friends,which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed.It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener; having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better.(高分句型三)
I believe it will all work out.Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的美國(guó)筆友Chris在給你的郵件中提到他最近在準(zhǔn)備SAT考試(美國(guó)高考),心理壓力很大,很苦惱,希望得到你的幫助.請(qǐng)你給他回信,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:安慰對(duì)方;分析心理壓力過(guò)大會(huì)導(dǎo)致的后果;給出相應(yīng)的建議及其理由.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be under  pressure 處于壓力之中;due to由于;deal with 應(yīng)對(duì),處理;not only,but also不僅,而且;Cheer up振作起來(lái);
 I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test.(高分句型一)
Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence.(高分句型二)
It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener; having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Chris,
       I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test.(高分句型一)Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress.But don't worry too much,or you may find yourself having problems with sleep,appetite,or even memory.Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress.
      The first thing you can try is to exercise.Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build confidence.(高分句型二)Another way is to enjoy some games with friends,which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed.It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener; having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better.(高分句型三)
       I believe it will all work out.Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further.
                                                                                                                            Yours,
                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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