Question

10．假設(shè)你是Li Ming，請給你的美國筆友Tom 寫一封 e-mail，介紹你的英語老師Mr．Lee．要點如下：
1．他40歲，有一個幸福的家；2．性格外向，與學(xué)生相處很好；3．他的課堂很有趣，課后常幫我們學(xué)英語；4．不抽煙，非常喜歡運動，擅長下棋；5．寫一至兩點其他同學(xué)對他的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)60-80.2．文中不要提及真實的校名和人名．
Dear Tom，
How are you recently？Now I'll tell you something about my English teacher Mr．Lee．
Mr．Lee is forty years old．He has a happy family．He's outgoing and gets along well with us．His classes are very interesting．After class，he often helps us with our English．He never smokes．He likes sports．He is especially good at playing chess．
Most of my classmates like him and think that he's not only a good teacher but also a good friend．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容給筆友介紹自己的英語老師Mr．Lee．注意信件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
（1）他40歲，有一個幸福的家；
（2）性格外向，與學(xué)生相處很好；
（3）他的課堂很有趣，課后常幫我們學(xué)英語；
（4）不抽煙，非常喜歡運動，擅長下棋；
（5）寫一至兩點其他同學(xué)對他的看法．
常用到的重點短語：
Outgoing 外向的、性格開朗的
get along well with sb 與某人相處融洽  
help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事 
be good at doing sth 擅長做某事  
not only…but also 不但…而且…
look forward to doing sth 盼望做某事
【高分句型】
1．He's  so outgoing that he gets along well with us．
so…that表示如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，中間加上形容詞或副詞原級，這里是副詞so修飾形容詞outgoing；包含一個重要短語get along well with sb與某人相處融洽．
2．Most of my classmates like him and think ①that he's②not only a good teacher but also a good friend．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為think的賓語．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…，連接兩個對等成分，這里是連接兩個主語，謂語動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)遵循就近原則．

解答 Dear Tom，
How are you recently？Now I'll tell you something about my English teacher Mr．Lee．（引出下文）
Mr．Lee is forty years old．He has a happy family．（年齡，家庭）He's  so outgoing that he gets along well with us．【高分句型】（性格及與學(xué)生相處融洽）His classes are very interesting．（課堂）After class，he often helps us with our English．（課下）He never smokes．（不吸煙） He likes sports．He is especially good at playing chess．（喜歡運動擅長下棋）
Most of my classmates like him and think that he's not only a good teacher but also a good friend．【高分句型】（同學(xué)的看法）
I'm looking forward to your reply．（表達(dá)愿望）
Yours，
Li Ming

點評 這是一篇所給材料比較詳細(xì)的提綱作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，可有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系