Question

20．假如你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展"創(chuàng)建和諧校園（to build a harmonious campus）"活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)，號(hào)召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園而努力．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．（短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．努力學(xué)習(xí)，參加課外活動(dòng)；
2．有愛(ài)互助，尊敬師長(zhǎng)；
3．愛(ài)護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物．
Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus．First of all，we should workhard at our lessons．After school，we had better take an active part in allkinds of school activities to help improve our health and study．
Then we should be friendlyto one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with ourclassmates．
Thirdly，it is our duty tokeep the school yard clean and tidy．We shouldn't throw wastes around or pickflowers．
Please do your best to makeour school more and more beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)號(hào)召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園而努力．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．努力學(xué)習(xí)，參加課外活動(dòng)；
2．友愛(ài)互助，尊敬師長(zhǎng)；
3．愛(ài)護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
first of all，then，thirdly首先，然后，第三
study hard努力學(xué)習(xí)
had better do sth最好做某事
be friendly to sb對(duì)某人友好
do one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

【高分句型】
1．After school，①we'd better ②take an active part in all kinds of activities ③to ④help improve our health and study．
①had better do sth最好做某事
②take an active part in積極參加
③動(dòng)詞不定式做為目的狀語(yǔ)．
④help do sth幫助做某事．
2．Thirdly，①it is our duty to ②keep the school yard clean and tidy．
①it's one's duty to do sth做某事是某人的職責(zé)，it為形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)為后面的不定式．
②keep sth+adj使某物保持怎樣的狀態(tài)．

解答 Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus．
     First of all，we should work hard at our lessons．After school，we had better take an active part in all kinds of school activities to help improve our health and study．（努力學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)，積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)）【高分句型】
     Then we should be friendly to one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates．（友愛(ài)互助，尊敬師長(zhǎng)）
     Thirdly，it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．【高分句型】We shouldn't throw wastes around or pickflowers．（愛(ài)護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物）
     Please do your best to make our school more and more beautiful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．