Question

【題目】根據(jù)所給提示完成100詞的英語短文，介紹你最喜愛的電影明星姜文。內容提示如下：

1. 姜文是世界著名的演員和導演，1963年1月5日出生于河北，他幽默，為人善良，易于相處(get on with)；

2. 自從他進入電影行業(yè)以來，已在多部自己導演的影片中扮演主角，他的電影老少皆宜；

3. 已獲得幾次最佳男演員獎，得到了粉絲們的高度評價；

4. 他對我的影響最大，……

注意：

1. 短文須包括所給內容要點，要點語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 第4要點的內容須用2--3句話展開合理想象，作適當發(fā)揮。

My Favourite Film Star —Jiang Wen

Answer 1

【答案】

Jiang Wen is a world-famous actor and director. He was born on 5 January 1963 in Hebei. When he was young, he stayed with his grandparents. He has a good sense of humour ,.He is very kind and willing to help others any time.

He has played the lead role(s) in many films directed by himself since he entered the film industry. His films are suitable for all ages. His fans think highly of his film《Let the bullets fly》. He has won several awards for Best Actor.

He has influenced me most because he always works hard. He’s my hero. My dream is to be an actor like him.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹九年級自己喜愛的明星姜文，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如He has played the lead role(s) in many films directed by himself since he entered the film industry. 和He has influenced me most because he always works hard.Because等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。