Question

【題目】作文

在青少年的成長過程中，一定有許多的煩惱和痛苦。

A請你根據(jù)自己的了解，寫出幾個你自己或者是身邊的朋友經(jīng)常遇到的問題。

B 請你根據(jù)A項中的內(nèi)容，選擇其中的一點或幾點寫一篇文章，闡述問題產(chǎn)生的原因，自己對問題的看法以及解決問題的方法。

要求：1有真情實感，語意連貫，語法正確；2詞數(shù)100-120左右。

Answer 1

【答案】High school students have come into a sensitive stage, and their bodies grow so fast and their minds have to keep up with the change. The boys and girls start to realize the gender difference. There will be some awkward moments between them. The troubled adolescent annoys many teenagers, because they have problems all the time. For the girls, they want to look as beautiful as the commercial models, so they go on a diet and struggle with hunger. For the boys, they want to be as cool as the heroes in the TV, so they pretend to care about nothing and go against the school regulations. The troubles teenagers meet are very typical, they can talk to their teachers or go to see the psychologist. They need to take the right attitudes towards these problems, or they will go the wrong way.

【解析】

本篇作文已給出寫作要求“根據(jù)對自己及身邊朋友的了解，寫出幾個你自己或者是身邊的朋友經(jīng)常遇到的問題。”所以在寫作過程中，我們需要先陳述自身存在的煩惱，然后分析產(chǎn)生這種煩惱產(chǎn)生的原因，最后再陳述自己對問題的看法或解決問題的方法，所以寫作思路共分三步：陳述問題--—分析原因—--解決辦法。寫作時注意語句的連貫性，語法和時態(tài)運用正確。

本篇就是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，先陳述高中生現(xiàn)在所處的特殊時期High school students have come into a sensitive stage, their bodies grow so fast and their minds have to keep up with the change.再分類陳述男生女生出現(xiàn)的問題，“For the girls…..” “For the boys……”最后他們應(yīng)該怎么擺脫這些問題“they can talk to their teachers or go to see the psychologist. They need to take the right attitudes towards these problems, or they will go the wrong way.”