Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

最近，你們班召開了以“我的中國(guó)夢(mèng)”為主題的班會(huì)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語寫一篇日記，記述班會(huì)情況及自己的感受。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

	Dreams	Reasons	Actions
Millie	Volunteer	1.be a volunteer doctor in the Red Cross 2.save people’ s lives	1. go to a good medical college; 2.try to learn different kinds of skills .
Simon	Teacher	1.teach the students knowledge 2.help them grow up healthily	1.work hard. 2. read more books;
I	….	…	…

要求：

1. 文章必須包含所提供的主要信息（Millie, Simon兩位同學(xué)暢談了自己的夢(mèng)想），并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；，2. 你談到了自己的夢(mèng)想，以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，

4.詞數(shù)：90詞左右（文章開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Encouraged by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

Millie has wanted

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Answer 1

【答案】

Millie has wanted to be a volunteer doctor . She wants to work for the Red Cross. She thinks doctors are doing a meaningful job. They not only save people’s lives but also encourage their patients to fight with illnesses. She said she must learn as much as she can so that she can get into a good medical college and learn different kinds of skills.

Simon also talked about his own dream, He wants to be a teacher when he grows up. He will teach the children in the poor areas. In order to be a teacher he will work hard from now on and read more books.

I want to be a writer. I can write many books to introduce our culture and let more people learn about the beauty of our country. Besides, the recorded culture will also pass down form generation to generation. In order to achieve my dream, I need to read more books and practice my writing.

【解析】

試題分析:這篇作文要求我們按照所給的信息寫一篇關(guān)于“我的中國(guó)夢(mèng)”的文章，文章既要包含Millie和Simon兩個(gè)同學(xué)的夢(mèng)想，他們的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)在題目中體現(xiàn)在出來，要用合適的語言將它們正確的表達(dá)出來；另外，還要寫出自己的夢(mèng)想，并且要寫出如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。

寫作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)通暢流利，是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文。題目中的信息點(diǎn)不是簡(jiǎn)單的堆砌，而是通過一些句型有機(jī)的組織在一起。文中使用了很多非常有用的表達(dá)方式，例如not only…but also…不僅，而且； so that 為了；from now on從今以后；pass down form generation to generation.一代代相傳；文中也用了一些連詞如Besides，In order to等，使文章更加流暢。