Question

【題目】【2013湖北黃石】假如你叫李華，你打算中考結(jié)束后和同學(xué)們結(jié)伴出游，但遭到了父母的反對(duì)。請(qǐng)結(jié)

合此事，談?wù)勅绾螌?duì)待父母及如何解決日常生活中與他們意見(jiàn)不一致的問(wèn)題。

要求：1. 邏輯清晰，語(yǔ)言通順，觀點(diǎn)不限，自由發(fā)揮，無(wú)需標(biāo)題。

2. 文中不能以任何方式出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和縣（市）區(qū)名及其它相關(guān)信息。

3. 詞數(shù)：80-100。

參考詞匯：中考 the High School Entrance Examination

Answer 1

【答案】

In my opinion, we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much. Since we are not adults, we need to discuss things with our parents before we make decisions. But when we do so, we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think. What should we do? I think we should explain to them what we think and ask them for advice.

Take my experience for example: Last time I told my parents about my summer travel plan and they simply said "No". I was really upset at first. But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety. So I talked to them later and made it clear that I would be safe together with my classmates. In the end, not only did they agree to my plan but also helped me prepare for the trip.

How nice it is that our parents and we can understand each other!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，故動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞主題確定寫作內(nèi)容，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。寫作中要注意舉出實(shí)例來(lái)說(shuō)明自己和父母之間的問(wèn)題，注意表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，如：I think……，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should后面動(dòng)詞用原形。為了是表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文思路清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)。使用了適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞及句式，為文章增色不少.如: In my opinion, Since we are not adults, But，we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think.，Take my experience for example:， at first，But later，In the end, not only but also，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.