Question

【題目】我國(guó)不少城市正在推廣公共自行車，提倡人們“綠色出行，低碳生活”。請(qǐng)你參考以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)談?wù)勍茝V公共自行車的好處。
1）首先，騎自行車更方便(convenient)，可以很容易地租還(rent and return)；
2）其次，眾所周知(as we all know)，在上學(xué)、上班時(shí)段交通特別繁忙，如果有更多的人選擇自行車，街道上就會(huì)有更少的汽車，也不會(huì)那么擁擠；
3）還有……（請(qǐng)至少補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)）
短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it's a good thing.
I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.

Answer 1

【答案】Now public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it's a good thing. To live a low-carbon life, we should call on people to ride bikes instead of driving cars. First, bikes are much more convenient than cars and people can rent and return them easily. Second, as we know, there's usually a heavy traffic when we are on the way to school or work. If more people ride bikes then there are fewer cars on the road, and there won't be too crowded. Third, it's the most important that riding bikes won't produce the dirty air to make pollution to our environment. And we can ride bikes to keep fit. Let's ride bikes instead of driving cars to protect the environment!

I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low-carbon life.

【解析】本文是一篇提綱類作文，要求考生介紹很多城市推廣騎自行車的這一現(xiàn)象，并說明推廣公共自行車的好處。 題目中給出了一部分寫作的內(nèi)容，考生可以針對(duì)這些提示，組織語(yǔ)言，展開寫作。其中第三條的內(nèi)容是需要考生自己來補(bǔ)充的，這就需要發(fā)揮想象力，再寫出兩條騎自行車的好處。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)的區(qū)別，不要寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，使用平時(shí)積累的短語(yǔ)和句型去表達(dá)，多使用簡(jiǎn)單句，再加上幾個(gè)復(fù)合句或者并列句，使文章富有節(jié)奏。句與句之間可以使用一些過渡詞和短語(yǔ)，使上下文意銜接緊湊，文章意思連貫。