Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)，請根據(jù)提示語完成短文。

請你寫一篇關(guān)于江寧生活的巨大變化及自己感受的90字左右的英文短文。

1. 江寧過去是個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)，現(xiàn)在是個(gè)現(xiàn)代化的城市；

2. 江寧有許多自然景觀，也有許多名勝古跡，每年有許多游客來江寧旅游；

3. 人們以前多騎自行車或步行出行，現(xiàn)在大部分人開車出行；

4. 幾年前污染是個(gè)問題，環(huán)境也糟糕；但現(xiàn)在政府采取行動(dòng)正在使得江寧變得山清水秀。

5.我希望……。

注意： 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；第5要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1-2句。

Jiangning

Answer 1

【答案】

In the past, JiangNing wasa small town. But now it is a modern city.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. There are a lot of natural landscape and many places of interests in Jiangning. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city..In the past,people went out by bike or on foot.People live a better life.But now they visit by car. In the past,pollution was very serious, there was rubbish everywhere. But now the government is taking actions to stop the pollution.The environment has become more beautiful. The mountain have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer.

I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：話題是家鄉(xiāng)的變化，要點(diǎn)是以表格形式表示的，結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰，分三部分，一部分是過去情況，一部分是現(xiàn)在情況，第三部分是將來展望，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不能只是把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city..等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。