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4．課外活動(dòng)可以讓我們增長知識，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格．許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動(dòng)，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動(dòng)等．
最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了"After-class Activities"的欄目．請你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)．
1．你校開展課外活動(dòng)的情況；
2．你參加過的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的益處；
3．為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)或?yàn)閷W(xué)校開設(shè)課外活動(dòng)提出建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80以上；
2．文中不得提及具體人名、校名及地名；
3．稿件的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
提示詞：take part in　　　sports　　　interesting　　　favourite
After-class Activities
Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools．

Answer 1

分析 本篇是一篇提綱作文，寫作時(shí)要抓住文章的要點(diǎn)，先寫清楚學(xué)校開展的課外活動(dòng)，再寫清楚給你帶來的好處，最后寫上為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)以及提出的建議；用第一人稱來寫，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作時(shí)做到句意通順、意思連貫．

解答 After-class Activities
  Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools．In our school there are various kinds of activities，for example，arts and sports．We enjoy them very much．Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good．Besides building my body and improving my skills，they also free me from the heavy work of study．Here I have some suggestions．To students，we'd better choose the activities which interest us and suit us； Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework．
  Dear friends，please actively take part in after-activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve your learning．

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文寫作時(shí)要抓住要點(diǎn)，緊扣After-class Activities這一主題，把文章中提示的要點(diǎn)以及關(guān)鍵詞用上，注意提建議的句型如：Here I have some suggestions；Why don't you…；Why not…等等，語法正確，書寫工整，過渡自然．